New Metal/Orchestral Song

[Marianas Curse]

Another song that I am currently in a love hate relationship with. What do you guys think of it?

 

[inertia]

Sounds too weird for my taste. It also sounds like nothing is played but completely sequenced, even the guitars. Sounds like random notes in guitar pro for the sake of pseudo-complexity.

The drum sound is very poor too and lacks dynamics. It would work better with a bigger drum sound and more suitable use of velocity....especially on the snare.

The orchestral-metal playoff doesn't work in my opinion, either.

The last problem is that instrumental music is really boring. This might work in a computer game or something but not something I would enjoy listening to, I am afraid.

 

[Marianas Curse]

Sounds too weird for my taste. It also sounds like nothing is played but completely sequenced, even the guitars. Sounds like random notes in guitar pro for the sake of pseudo-complexity.

The drum sound is very poor too and lacks dynamics. It would work better with a bigger drum sound and more suitable use of velocity....especially on the snare.

The orchestral-metal playoff doesn't work in my opinion, either.

The last problem is that instrumental music is really boring. This might work in a computer game or something but not something I would enjoy listening to, I am afraid.

I am currently still making changes to the song so all instruments are currently programmed. Once it progresses to its final structure I will record the guitars and humanise the drum sections as well as adding vocals.