I finally wrote a decent riff (or at least I hope so) and recorded it thanks to some advice from people on this forum. It is kind of Killswitch Engageish. Please tell me what you think of the mix. I tried to go for a roomier snare than I normally do. Also there is no bass yet. Thanks guys!
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/324577/Riff 01 02.wav
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/324577/Riff 01 02.wav