new song for mix comments

[billcraftmetal15]

Hey guys i've uploaded another song that i've just done.

http://www.sneapforum.celtiaproductions.co.uk/bshuker/Forlorn.mp3

It's emg81/85 into pod xt quad tracked with the patches mendel posted.
Drum kit from hell.
bass is di into ampeg plug

Any comments are muchly appreciated.

Hope you like it.

Ben.

 

[Nebulous]

Vocals could come down abit, bass and guitars up and DKFH could use some tweaking to get it sounding more natural.

 

[Dave Cardwell]

Yeah bring up the guitars for sure. The vocals sound good. The snare sounds too much like the same sample is repeating over and over on the blasts.

 

[billcraftmetal15]

ta for the comments guys i'll work on it some more.

if anyone's interested i could upload these tracks for people to play with if they want it?!