Alright, here's my thoughts. The second guitar harmony for the intro riff (3-4) sounds good. But right now, Im not so sure of (5-6), the harmony on 9 sounds good, and same with the slower part (12-15). The faster part (starting on 23) sounds mostly right, but to me, it sounds like 1. It might not be fast enough, or 2. There are to many notes in there. Otherwise, great job! Ill try to work on it more, and then send you what I get.