old song new mix/master. hardcore

[dankarghh]

hey guys. i know i've posted this song before, hopefully no one remembers..
this is my first paid job as such and im trying to get the mix and master to sound as good possible.

i just tried a stereo widener on guitars too, definitely spaces them out a bit.

keen to here what everyone thinks, hopefully just adding final tweaks before finally finishing up.

how are the guitars and bass coming together?
i really want the mix to pack a punch but i don't seem to be getting it.

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http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3200729/hereforbloodmaster4bass.mp3

 

[dankarghh]

no one has an ideas?

 

[jimwilbourne]

I actually like this mix as it's coming together.
the vocals are really dry though. they're not fitting in because of it. maybe a tiny bit to loud imo.

but I I'd have to cross reference it with my car or headphones to be completely sure.
just moved my srtup to a new environment this week and I'm still getting used to it.

 

[dankarghh]

thanks for listening dude.
i always have trouble with vocals. theres some verb there, perhaps not enough?

 

[dankarghh]

last try promise.