Onions wanted on this song.

[RAZRBAKK]

Hey guys,

I'm looking for some opinions and feedback(positive and negative) on this song. It's not 100% complete, but I want some help with the arrangement and layout.

The mix is nothing to really go by just yet. I plan on retracking this with a different guitar.



Signal chain:

Guitar-->Line 6 UX-->Logic-->Le456-->LaConvolver(with an ENGLV30 impulse)-->M30 Reverb for cleans.

Bass is just a garageband plugin

Drums are Superior 2.0

 

[Daybreak]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/61928205/Onions.mp3

Hey man I put onions on your song as you asked, I think these are negative onions though as I don't like onions, hope that's okay!

 

[FarBeyondMetal]

LOLLLLLLLLL

Song is cool but you ain't getting none of my onions theys all mine!@!!

 

[RAZRBAKK]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/61928205/Onions.mp3

Hey man I put onions on your song as you asked, I think these are negative onions though as I don't like onions, hope that's okay!

lol buddy I'm dying.

 

[Spectivum]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/61928205/Onions.mp3

Hey man I put onions on your song as you asked, I think these are negative onions though as I don't like onions, hope that's okay!

This made my day...

I only have garlic at home but I will still share with you. distorted parts are a bit shy so I would pull those up to bring more contrast and drama so we can shed some tears if the onions are not enough.