Opinion wanted on part of song...

[dill_the_devil]

Here's something I recorded today - it's the first 1:48 of a song I've been playing around with for a while. I recorded the rhythm guitar myself and used Leafdrums for the drum track, and stuck it all together in Adobe Audition. I'm gonna do the bass track and maybe some lead soon, and probably get round to recording the rest of the track - but until then, what do people think of what I've got so far?

[url]http://www.grebo-heights.wox.org/dill/riffs/demo1[/url] - rhythm guitar and drums.mp3

 

[Pita Bread]

What style of music are you going for?

 

[PainMiseryDeath]

I think it sounds good. With the right voclas over it, those riffs could work great. Nice job.

 

[dill_the_devil]

Thanks PainMiseryDeath - hopefully I'l be able to record the rest sometime soon, so I'll add the rest.

Pira Bread - to be honest, I dunno - there's a part later in that song that goes acoustic and then vaguely screamo, and some of the other riffs I've come up with go a bit thrash, some a bit metalcore... *shrugs*