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[zaurus]

Hi all,

Thisi is a new mix I need advice on.

Here (the FTP):
http://www.sneapforum.celtiaproductions.co.uk/zaurus/Unholy%20Flame%20-%20Ahead.mp3

or here (soundclick):
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=702465&songID=5877165

I have doubts about the overall balance, drums (kick?), mastering, guitar tone, well... about everything...

 

[zaurus]

So... no one?