OT: Post your poetry or writing in here

[Will Bozarth]

i like! i like!

 

[KameloX]

Awesome stuff, BWDay. I don't do poetry, but I like that one a lot.

 

[Tee]

from two years ago... no metal at all...



DIRECTOR'S LUST


I am left to sail today the achromatic dreams alone,
To lay numb defenceless under his illusive throne.
The last drop of life in me is boiling,
This emptiness that I'm a part of now smashed the worthless living.

What have I done to deserve this disdain?
I've tried so hard to play well,
To hide away the pain.

Convinced of power that lied within
That ridicolous role I was in,
I've awaited the applause
Proud of myself without cause.

More than once I've lived that sound
Of hands put together for life going down...

This one last time they've walked me to the door,
Showed me the way out,
Echoed their laughter:
"This is what you have lived for!"

So, farewell to the students who learn the same lines,
I'll be waiting, welcome you in another space and time.

I'm to fade away now slowly,
My mind to become dust.
I'm taking the last, the bitter bow;
I satisfied director's lust.

 

[Black Winter Day]

Originally posted by KameloX
Awesome stuff, BWDay. I don't do poetry, but I like that one a lot.

thanks! i appreciate it!

 

[dreaming neon darkspot]

It seems like so many ppl here have a natural talent for writing poetry...just like almost everyone in my school last year was great at drawing and there were so many oppurtunities for the artists,but next to nothing for the writers...writers of stories,not poetry.I guess I'm the oddball in most cases because my talents lie solely in writing of stories*sigh*

 

[ledmag]

Originally posted by dead6skin6mask6
dragon, led, and krymson... those are pretty good

Thanks dude. yours is great stuff. as is EVERYONES so far.

Ill hunt the whole thing of mine up, and try to get it in this thread.

 

[Black Winter Day]

hahaha, a lot of my good poems were posted on the cradle of filth board a while back. . . can't find any of em now! i'll look though

 

[dreaming neon darkspot]

Cradle of Filth board?Oooh,where is it?Can I have the address?

 

[Black Winter Day]

it's at www.theorderofthedragon.com

i used to post there a lot, but i haven't been there in a while

it's got some eccentric, yet intelligent people there (what else would you expect?)

they also have a forum where you can post your writings

 

[dreaming neon darkspot]

Thank you ever so much,BWD,I will check it out right now.Sounds interesting.

 

[famousamoswillkillyou]

I can't write half as good as most of these people... But I shall grace (hehe) y'all with the Elbib, as soon as I remember where the fuck I put it.

 

[krymson]

Originally posted by dead6skin6mask6
dragon, led, and krymson... those are pretty good

Thanks much, likewise to BWD - Very interesting stuff.

 

[Unregistered]

6 million jews
not enough to lose

 

[Will Bozarth]

a joke or not, fuck off, prick

 

[famousamoswillkillyou]

Originally posted by Unregistered
6 million jews
not enough to lose

This stopped being funny... no, wait, it never was funny. I have Jewish friends, so shut the fuck up.

 

[Black Winter Day]

hahaha, is that you, rusted?

 

[Unregistered]

what do you think

 

[krymson]

I think we should instate a 'most insensitive' award, just for that post.

 

[famousamoswillkillyou]

Of course it was Rusted. Apparently he still doesn't realize, even if we don't really give a fuck anymore, it's not funny. Rusted, I mean no offense to you, but the shit is getting old, man.

 

[Dragonlord]

thanks from me too d6s6m6.

btw I remembered the other poem,I like this one better


Clad In Hopes


Clad in hopes I fly
nevermore shall I cry
for tears leave only stains.

Waiting for the dawn
optimistic I'm reborn
so shatter all my chains.

Innocence
protect myself behind her veil
I sense
nothing can touch me
at last again I am
in the Beginning of my Tale.