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The Angel
Through many times I wanted to show my love
Which I could never amount to bring
Though you mean a great lot to me
I'm disappointed in what you see
I'm sorry for the way I acted through many times
Even though you say nothing was wrong
I wanted to show how much I cared about you
But never could I prove the love I have that grew
I know I haven't been the best of boyfriends
And Im disappointed in myself for that
I always try the best I can be
Even if you can't see it from me
I'm sorry for the way I never was
I hope to amount to what you expect
I'm sorry for the way I seemed to be
Because what you saw disappoints me
The way you make me feel when I'm with you
It's like magic that flows through the air
Whenever I am out with you
It's like nothing I ever knew
Even though I may not show it most of the time
I want you to know something from my heart
Even if you can't see my love for you
Let it be known that its true
I never dreampt someone would feel this way for me
So it all is very new to me
I am doing my best to show I care
I only want to give the best even if the actions aren't there
I'm sorry for the way I haven't been
I am disappointed that I wasn't
Hoping you know how I feel about you
Hoping you know my love is true
Many days and nights I have thought to myself
That this angel is all one great dream
Then I pinch myself and realize
This angel is real in my eyes.
Through many times I wanted to show my love
Which I could never amount to bring
Though you mean a great lot to me
I'm disappointed in what you see
I'm sorry for the way I acted through many times
Even though you say nothing was wrong
I wanted to show how much I cared about you
But never could I prove the love I have that grew
I know I haven't been the best of boyfriends
And Im disappointed in myself for that
I always try the best I can be
Even if you can't see it from me
I'm sorry for the way I never was
I hope to amount to what you expect
I'm sorry for the way I seemed to be
Because what you saw disappoints me
The way you make me feel when I'm with you
It's like magic that flows through the air
Whenever I am out with you
It's like nothing I ever knew
Even though I may not show it most of the time
I want you to know something from my heart
Even if you can't see my love for you
Let it be known that its true
I never dreampt someone would feel this way for me
So it all is very new to me
I am doing my best to show I care
I only want to give the best even if the actions aren't there
I'm sorry for the way I haven't been
I am disappointed that I wasn't
Hoping you know how I feel about you
Hoping you know my love is true
Many days and nights I have thought to myself
That this angel is all one great dream
Then I pinch myself and realize
This angel is real in my eyes.
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
Curse of Life
Death, is all I see
It surrounds me
Stuck in this empty space
This desolate place
My suffering continues to strive
I am cursed with eternal life
The one I loved, is dead now
Suicide, her afterlife guide
Loneliness, consumes me
Treading this land
To see her face
Never to see my fate
The curse lives on
Shall I ever find her, once again
Or is her face, just a memory
My torment, grows every day
Why am I forced to live this way
Every day I pray for death
Can it be real, is that her face infront of me
Have our souls and our love, become one again
Can we once again have what we had before
Is the curse, gone
She, is dead again
I now know, what my curse is
LONELINESS
TORMENT
SUFFERING
SEND ME INTO, RAGE
With this dagger, I shall destroy mankinds
My hands shall seal their fate
I shall bring armageddon onto this world
My curse shall be what I know best, DEATH
With every death, I see her fate
When they plead, it's her voice
But this is my calling, she shall die a billion deaths
Only a million more left
I feel no sorrow
Life is overrated
And my soul feels only, RAGE
They, are all gone now
My deed is done
I shall now rest peacefully
For all eternity
In hell, I bleed now
I was just a puppet in the devil's game
He used my suffering
He made me vain
I know now, my killing only caused more pain
I damned my soul for eternity
The curse lives on
Death, is all I see
It surrounds me
Stuck in this empty space
This desolate place
My suffering continues to strive
I am cursed with eternal life
The one I loved, is dead now
Suicide, her afterlife guide
Loneliness, consumes me
Treading this land
To see her face
Never to see my fate
The curse lives on
Shall I ever find her, once again
Or is her face, just a memory
My torment, grows every day
Why am I forced to live this way
Every day I pray for death
Can it be real, is that her face infront of me
Have our souls and our love, become one again
Can we once again have what we had before
Is the curse, gone
She, is dead again
I now know, what my curse is
LONELINESS
TORMENT
SUFFERING
SEND ME INTO, RAGE
With this dagger, I shall destroy mankinds
My hands shall seal their fate
I shall bring armageddon onto this world
My curse shall be what I know best, DEATH
With every death, I see her fate
When they plead, it's her voice
But this is my calling, she shall die a billion deaths
Only a million more left
I feel no sorrow
Life is overrated
And my soul feels only, RAGE
They, are all gone now
My deed is done
I shall now rest peacefully
For all eternity
In hell, I bleed now
I was just a puppet in the devil's game
He used my suffering
He made me vain
I know now, my killing only caused more pain
I damned my soul for eternity
The curse lives on
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
"With this dagger, I shall destroy mankinds"
*mankind*
"With every death, I see her fate"
*face*
*mankind*
"With every death, I see her fate"
*face*
deathstrike from hell
Deathstrike lambtron
when i was little i had no sense
i took a wizz on an electric fence
it hurt so bad i shocked my balls
i took a dump in my overalls
in the days of old
when knights were bold
and condoms werent invented
they put their socks
upon their cocks
and babies were prevented
:-D
i took a wizz on an electric fence
it hurt so bad i shocked my balls
i took a dump in my overalls
in the days of old
when knights were bold
and condoms werent invented
they put their socks
upon their cocks
and babies were prevented
:-D
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
My Land
Welcome to my land
of the free
the proud
Welcome to my land
of the greedy
the spiteful
This is my land
the top dog
This is my land
where no one cares about the rest of the world
I live in a land
where you can be whatever you choose
I live in a land
where money matters more then life
This land has the grandest of history
It's the freest of the free
Still society
Ruins all their dreams
This is the land
that was built on character
This is the land
that discriminates
This is the land
where we stood up for one cause
This is the land
where violence rules
This is the land
with the greatest of leaders
This is the land
where everyone follows
This is the land
where men fought for their beliefs
This is the land
where we bomb and then forget
This is the land
built on freedom of religion
This is the land
of bigots
This is the land
of ADDICTION
The people of this country
Have yet again stood up for one cause
We have come together to survive the worst of tragedies
But how long can we last
With bigotry and gluttony controlling our country
Welcome to my land
of the free
the proud
Welcome to my land
of the greedy
the spiteful
This is my land
the top dog
This is my land
where no one cares about the rest of the world
I live in a land
where you can be whatever you choose
I live in a land
where money matters more then life
This land has the grandest of history
It's the freest of the free
Still society
Ruins all their dreams
This is the land
that was built on character
This is the land
that discriminates
This is the land
where we stood up for one cause
This is the land
where violence rules
This is the land
with the greatest of leaders
This is the land
where everyone follows
This is the land
where men fought for their beliefs
This is the land
where we bomb and then forget
This is the land
built on freedom of religion
This is the land
of bigots
This is the land
of ADDICTION
The people of this country
Have yet again stood up for one cause
We have come together to survive the worst of tragedies
But how long can we last
With bigotry and gluttony controlling our country
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
Gluttony
I take a look at the world
And what I see
Disgustes me
The men in the suit & tie
The coporate scum
Laughing at the smaller guy
Everyone wants it
They must have it
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
We're living in a gluttonous world
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
We dream of having it all
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
You're born into this world knowing only these things
We polute our children's minds
With this virus
To be popular
To be on top
Is all they ever want
It's all they ever see
Everyone wants it
They must have it
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
We're living in a gluttonous world
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
We dream of having it all
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
You're born into this world
Knowing only these things
We wonder why they hate us
We're blind to see our fault
We're blind to see
OUR Gluttony
Repeat Chorus
We have our own books
Our own videos
How to be Rich
How to Conrol
Yet we're still bllind
We still can't see
OUR Gluttony
Repeat Chorus
We wonder how the world will die
But it's clear to see
The killer will be
OUR Gluttony
We want it
We need it
The Power
The Wealth
We're fighting for Control
We dream of a perfect world but
The Power
The Wealth
Makes us out of control
We're out of control
I take a look at the world
And what I see
Disgustes me
The men in the suit & tie
The coporate scum
Laughing at the smaller guy
Everyone wants it
They must have it
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
We're living in a gluttonous world
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
We dream of having it all
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
You're born into this world knowing only these things
We polute our children's minds
With this virus
To be popular
To be on top
Is all they ever want
It's all they ever see
Everyone wants it
They must have it
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
We're living in a gluttonous world
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
We dream of having it all
POWER
WEALTH
CONTROL
You're born into this world
Knowing only these things
We wonder why they hate us
We're blind to see our fault
We're blind to see
OUR Gluttony
Repeat Chorus
We have our own books
Our own videos
How to be Rich
How to Conrol
Yet we're still bllind
We still can't see
OUR Gluttony
Repeat Chorus
We wonder how the world will die
But it's clear to see
The killer will be
OUR Gluttony
We want it
We need it
The Power
The Wealth
We're fighting for Control
We dream of a perfect world but
The Power
The Wealth
Makes us out of control
We're out of control
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
Metal Forever
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Take down the popculture tyrant
Reclaim thy thrown
Metal will fight its way back into everyone's home
Destroy the fakes
Don't let them leave with their lives
Hear their grunts, their sighs
Slashing its way
Through greats' graves
Bow down before thee
And look at in fear
For true Metal is here
And it can't be killed
Metal Forever
It shall rule the dark sky
Metal Forever
True followers shall never abandon
Metal shall live in our hearts FOREVER
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Metal shall not be denied as a ruler Anymore
True Metal shall soar
Respecting the greats that came before thee
A destructive force we shall be
But Metalheads must Unite
And join as one
Don't leave this matter alone
Slashing they way through the masses
With they sacred sword
They shall be slaughtered and gored
Metal Forever
It shall command the Dark Armies
Metal Forever
The flames shall burn in our souls forever
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Metal cannot die
Metal shall live FOREVER
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Take down the popculture tyrant
Reclaim thy thrown
Metal will fight its way back into everyone's home
Destroy the fakes
Don't let them leave with their lives
Hear their grunts, their sighs
Slashing its way
Through greats' graves
Bow down before thee
And look at in fear
For true Metal is here
And it can't be killed
Metal Forever
It shall rule the dark sky
Metal Forever
True followers shall never abandon
Metal shall live in our hearts FOREVER
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Metal shall not be denied as a ruler Anymore
True Metal shall soar
Respecting the greats that came before thee
A destructive force we shall be
But Metalheads must Unite
And join as one
Don't leave this matter alone
Slashing they way through the masses
With they sacred sword
They shall be slaughtered and gored
Metal Forever
It shall command the Dark Armies
Metal Forever
The flames shall burn in our souls forever
Metalheads Unite
Fight
Metal cannot die
Metal shall live FOREVER
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
Invisible War, The
Through the mist of the night
A blurry figure comes into view
With a sword at his side
And dark companion following behind
Their grey cracked eyes tell a story never heard
They are the soldiers of the unknown
Warriors os the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
Furry broke lose
And the war was the way
The slashing of swords
Lasted only 7 days
MAny a strong man
Was brutally slaughtered
Blood filled the ground
Grunts and screams heard all around
The skies turned black
Death filled the air
The earth split in half
As the blood flowed in
Demons arose from within
They are soldiers of the unknown
Warriors of the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
It had become a horrible sight
With only 15 men left to fight
The Demons were invincible
They stole the souls
Of 13 more
Angels began to descend from the heavens
Now a holy war
Had begun
They are soldiers of the unknown
Warriors of the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
Two brave men
Forged their way through
They saw the world turn upside down
As angle's mangled wings and Demonish screams fell to the ground
These two men never looked back
They just kept running to escape with their lives
god raised the fog to let them walk through
But a Demon escaped instead
The first man stepped foward
And with the holy sword
Sent the Demon to hell
Forever ending the invisible war
They are soldiers of the unknown
Warriors of the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
Now 2000 years after that fateful day
When the day becomes grey
Their figures can be seen
Painted in the sky
With swords held high
They now fight
Demons of the night
They are soldiers of the unknown
Warriors of the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
Through the mist of the night
A blurry figure comes into view
With a sword at his side
And dark companion following behind
Their grey cracked eyes tell a story never heard
They are the soldiers of the unknown
Warriors os the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
Furry broke lose
And the war was the way
The slashing of swords
Lasted only 7 days
MAny a strong man
Was brutally slaughtered
Blood filled the ground
Grunts and screams heard all around
The skies turned black
Death filled the air
The earth split in half
As the blood flowed in
Demons arose from within
They are soldiers of the unknown
Warriors of the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
It had become a horrible sight
With only 15 men left to fight
The Demons were invincible
They stole the souls
Of 13 more
Angels began to descend from the heavens
Now a holy war
Had begun
They are soldiers of the unknown
Warriors of the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
Two brave men
Forged their way through
They saw the world turn upside down
As angle's mangled wings and Demonish screams fell to the ground
These two men never looked back
They just kept running to escape with their lives
god raised the fog to let them walk through
But a Demon escaped instead
The first man stepped foward
And with the holy sword
Sent the Demon to hell
Forever ending the invisible war
They are soldiers of the unknown
Warriors of the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
Now 2000 years after that fateful day
When the day becomes grey
Their figures can be seen
Painted in the sky
With swords held high
They now fight
Demons of the night
They are soldiers of the unknown
Warriors of the mist
They are the only ones left
Of the invisible war
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
Facing Imperfection
Could this face in the mirror be mine
This scared torn face
Be the same one
Plastered on my head
Could these eyes
These tormented eyes
Be the same ones I look through everyday
Could these lips
These rough harsh lips
Be the same ones I talk through
Could these ears
These protruding ears
Be the same ones that allow me to hear
No they can't be
This can't be me
This must be fixed
I must look perfect
I must be beautiful
The face in the mirror just won't do
I see them laugh and stare
They point at me
At my imperfect face
They are so perfect
So beautiful
I must look like them
This thing must be fixed
I must look like them
No matter the cost
Because the face in the mirror just won't do
The surgery went great
All of my problems are fixed
I am now perfect
Now one of them
But they're still pointing
They're still lauging
The face in the mirror
Is still imperfect
But what went wrong
I changed the outside
But forgot about the in
I am still tormented
Still Imperfect
Am I insane
Isn't this what I wanted
What I longed to have
If so
Then why do I feel worse than before
I feel like I lost a part of myself
That I can't have back
I now look like them
Cost didn't matter
But the face in the mirror still won't do
Could this face in the mirror be mine
This scared torn face
Be the same one
Plastered on my head
Could these eyes
These tormented eyes
Be the same ones I look through everyday
Could these lips
These rough harsh lips
Be the same ones I talk through
Could these ears
These protruding ears
Be the same ones that allow me to hear
No they can't be
This can't be me
This must be fixed
I must look perfect
I must be beautiful
The face in the mirror just won't do
I see them laugh and stare
They point at me
At my imperfect face
They are so perfect
So beautiful
I must look like them
This thing must be fixed
I must look like them
No matter the cost
Because the face in the mirror just won't do
The surgery went great
All of my problems are fixed
I am now perfect
Now one of them
But they're still pointing
They're still lauging
The face in the mirror
Is still imperfect
But what went wrong
I changed the outside
But forgot about the in
I am still tormented
Still Imperfect
Am I insane
Isn't this what I wanted
What I longed to have
If so
Then why do I feel worse than before
I feel like I lost a part of myself
That I can't have back
I now look like them
Cost didn't matter
But the face in the mirror still won't do
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
Right now, I am working on a concept story that takes place on another planet in another universe. It will travel through time, and show the beginning, when the creatures and nature lived in peace. And the end, with human like creatures that have destroyed nature and fight over their differences and greed. Between these times the human like creatures came in and killed off all of the strongest creatures because they saw them as a threat. And at the end, the human like creatures have a huge war (nuclear maybe) and the spirits of the creatures they killed see this as the perfect time to come in and get revenge. All of this hatred, vengefulness, greed, etc. destroy the planet and everything on it. Also one of the creatures is the dragon and in the beginning he is strong but gentle (and doesn't breath fire) but when the human creatures come in and try to destroy them they become angry and this causes a fire to rage inside of them and in return causes them to breath fire. The rest of the creatures including the human creature, I shall invent names for (which is what I am working on now). Whenever I finish this, I might post it.
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
I have written the overview lyrics, now keep in mind that it is an overview, so I don't describe much or give away much yet. It is just an overview.
Another World pt. 1: Journey through Time
Welcome, to this universe
Where you shall see new things
Welcome, to this world
Yet it's all the same
Welcome to the beginning
When the world knew no pain
Once a week falls fresh rain
The world is bountiful
With nature, all around
The creatures, roam freely
They know not of anger
They live peacefully
This is where our journey begins
Let's skip forward, to present time
The land is now barren
Full of filth and grime
Nature sheds her last tear
The creatures, walk in fear
They know only greed
They kill and destroy
Just to have a little more
They're all the same
Life is now, just a game
Our journey ends here
The next chapter, is set to begin
Another World pt. 1: Journey through Time
Welcome, to this universe
Where you shall see new things
Welcome, to this world
Yet it's all the same
Welcome to the beginning
When the world knew no pain
Once a week falls fresh rain
The world is bountiful
With nature, all around
The creatures, roam freely
They know not of anger
They live peacefully
This is where our journey begins
Let's skip forward, to present time
The land is now barren
Full of filth and grime
Nature sheds her last tear
The creatures, walk in fear
They know only greed
They kill and destroy
Just to have a little more
They're all the same
Life is now, just a game
Our journey ends here
The next chapter, is set to begin
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
I have also written the first line of the next song, or atleast maybe the first line, it could be changed. Right now, I am working on the other creatures and their looks and the look of the world so I can write the rest of the lyrics.
Another World pt. 2: The Beginning
Let us take a closer look now, at the beginning
Up in the trees the birds are singing
Giant, are most creatures here
They travel this land far and near
Up in the rainbow skies
The Dragon soars high
He is the strongest of them all
Hear his gentle call
Another World pt. 2: The Beginning
Let us take a closer look now, at the beginning
Up in the trees the birds are singing
Giant, are most creatures here
They travel this land far and near
Up in the rainbow skies
The Dragon soars high
He is the strongest of them all
Hear his gentle call
dreaming neon darkspot
natures' retard
Last night,I just randomly started writing "poetry"(or something that would resemble it)because I couldn't write any stories...Keep in mind,I don't really think I can write poetry,I still can't,and this thing which I'm going to post will express those sentiments.Just read it....flame me,if you wish.
Unfarmiliar feelings rushing thru me
Torturing my dumb,unknowing senses
Like blood flowing down a hollow concrete pipe
Something awakening that never existed before
Random thought pattern that make no sense
Repulsing the one that reads it
I'm no good at that kind of "technical poetry",the kind that sounds like it was taken from a journal of an LSD trip
Repulsing the one that reads it
All I can do is refine the primative,raw poetry that I once did
Am I any better now?
Unfarmiliar feelings rushing thru me
Torturing my dumb,unknowing senses
Like blood flowing down a hollow concrete pipe
Something awakening that never existed before
Random thought pattern that make no sense
Repulsing the one that reads it
I'm no good at that kind of "technical poetry",the kind that sounds like it was taken from a journal of an LSD trip
Repulsing the one that reads it
All I can do is refine the primative,raw poetry that I once did
Am I any better now?
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
Tyrant God
Suffering
Reigning
The Tryant God
There is no Salvation
Eternal Torment
His gift to His Creation
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
Choose to not Believe
Punishment for Eternity
Vengeful is He
Wrathful and Vain
Death He shall Bring
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
Do you feel Safe
With your God by your Side
Ripping off your Hide
Dictator of All
Under Him
We shall Fall
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
His Creation
An image of Him
Fallible and Hateful
Shows his Character
Hell, his praise of Singing
And in It
We are Living
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
Matyr
He wants you to Be
Killing His Game
Killing His Name
Peace means Death
In His Eyes
Obey the Book
Of His Lies
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
Suffering
Reigning
The Tryant God
There is no Salvation
Eternal Torment
His gift to His Creation
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
Choose to not Believe
Punishment for Eternity
Vengeful is He
Wrathful and Vain
Death He shall Bring
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
Do you feel Safe
With your God by your Side
Ripping off your Hide
Dictator of All
Under Him
We shall Fall
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
His Creation
An image of Him
Fallible and Hateful
Shows his Character
Hell, his praise of Singing
And in It
We are Living
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
Matyr
He wants you to Be
Killing His Game
Killing His Name
Peace means Death
In His Eyes
Obey the Book
Of His Lies
Bow down to your God
Of which you can not see
But I shall not believe
So let me be
PlatypusJesus
A Dead Sun Serenity
Repeating Yesterday
Padded white walls
Four surround me
Samething
Everyday they feed me
In here
There is no tomorrow
I weap
In my sorrow
Another day
It's all the same
Never changing
I'm repeating yesterday
Put here
Because of my opinion
Deja Vu
My reality
They feed me pills
Of blues and reds
To keep me calm
To keep me calm
In my corner
I wallow
Their apathy
I swallow
Chorus
At one time
I was sane
I had a job
Swimming in green
I said I saw the Light
I saw our future
They shoved me away
And in a jacket that day
Chorus
Even if I tried
To escape
It's too late
I have been isolated
Allienated
My life is over
With the noose
Around my neck
I take the leap
Down Under
Chorus
Padded white walls
Four surround me
Samething
Everyday they feed me
In here
There is no tomorrow
I weap
In my sorrow
Another day
It's all the same
Never changing
I'm repeating yesterday
Put here
Because of my opinion
Deja Vu
My reality
They feed me pills
Of blues and reds
To keep me calm
To keep me calm
In my corner
I wallow
Their apathy
I swallow
Chorus
At one time
I was sane
I had a job
Swimming in green
I said I saw the Light
I saw our future
They shoved me away
And in a jacket that day
Chorus
Even if I tried
To escape
It's too late
I have been isolated
Allienated
My life is over
With the noose
Around my neck
I take the leap
Down Under
Chorus
