\alive said:Hmm... too quiet, not very advanced.
I'd like you to growl. Do not go up in the high notes. Do not use any filter/distortion/whatever for the voice.
Very calming song.
\alive said:Hmm... too quiet, not very advanced.
I'd like you to growl. Do not go up in the high notes. Do not use any filter/distortion/whatever for the voice.
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what?
Thanks a lot man, I really appreciate it. Well guys, looks like Ill have enough money for a new acoustic guitar by this next saturday, so I will definitely re-record this song with hopefully "better" vocals, and non out of tune electric guitars.Marksveld said:To "what album is that one"
its on "Still Day Beneath the Sun" their 7'' vinyl.
Back to the song- the voice has a ton of potential. Work on it and it'll be great. And the instrumentals are fantastic. Good job! I learned this song after the first time I heard it.
I like it
Sorry, i should have been more clear. The problem is that i have no musical background, so i do not know the insider-terms of all the stuff that i want to say.Leper_/-\ffinity said:Hmmm...I dont know what the hell you are talking about. You want me to growl on this track???? And please elaborat on "not very advanced", what the hell does that mean??? Did you mean to say not very innovative???
Leper_/-\ffinity said:Hey guys and gals, Ive been doing lots of acoustic folk playing, and writing some songs, but in terms of recording, decided to start with a cover of Patterns In The Ivy 2, to get a feel of my voice, to see if I can sing at all, so here it is, at my new dmusic site, please take a listen and comment, thanks!!
Click Me For The Song
Novembers Paul said:You know what, after reading some of the responses before I listened to this, I expected it to be bad. My expectations were wrong. It's not bad at all, and I think it's actually a good job! You are certainly NOT tone deaf, as you are in tune. That's the first step in singing. Now it's just voice control, and that comes with practice, so keep singing, and in a few months, you'll improve even more. Very nice job!