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[ezekiel]

isn't it good that
quarrels can be overcome
by maudlin's music?

 

[D Mullholand]

hospital music
awoke the heavy nurse
vagrant throngs amass

 

[Nagle]

My ex annoys me
She should shape up and not suck
I'm gonna drink beer

 

[FuSoYa]

Hey alex nagle
I'll try to give you a call
When I'm more awake.

 

[fainéant]

Originally posted by saturnix


fuckin' a, my friend;
i would sell my mother as
a slave to get them

hell, I would buy your
mother, take the transaction,
pimp it for maudlin.

 

[Heliologue]

Originally posted by D Mullholand
hospital music
awoke the heavy nurse
vagrant throngs amass

an antiseptic
peppermint and ugly wounds
kind of aesthetic

 

[xfer]

Ex-girlfriends should not
ask you to go out, and then
demand their gifts back.

 

[D Mullholand]

Originally posted by saturnix
an antiseptic
peppermint and ugly wounds
kind of aesthetic

seagulls in patterns
wooden aqualungs ashore
octopus groaning

 

[xfer]

Bumped by a whitehat
Seething, bruised, book dropped. Curse my
non-omnipotence!

 

[FuSoYa]

Whitehats bug me too.
But I can't decide who's worse--
Them, or golf-hat punks.

 

[xfer]

I was basically looking for an excuse to use "non-omnipotence" as a single, five-syllable line!

 

[O'blivion]

Originally posted by D Mullholand
i'll do the research on this band, zanx as usual! and i think your avatar tries to access my floppy drive!!

you'd probably also like Tarantel. they're kind of like godspeed you black emperor! Steve Von Till's solo work is brilliant as well (kind of a Jeff Buckley with more raw emotion.) actually everything on neurot recordings is superb.

 

[D Mullholand]

Originally posted by O'blivion
you'd probably also like Tarantel. they're kind of like godspeed you black emperor! Steve Von Till's solo work is brilliant as well (kind of a Jeff Buckley with more raw emotion.) actually everything on neurot recordings is superb.

S.V.T. is the Neurosis singer? ok.

have you heard Bark Psychosis? (the band for whom the 'post-rock' category was originally invented)

 

[Heliologue]

Originally posted by D Mullholand
seagulls in patterns
wooden aqualungs ashore
octopus groaning

rings of salty rime
aureoles of water lines
and frothing wave caps

 

[FalseTodd]

I just discovered something:

Slaughter of the Soul
Suicidal Final Art
Children, born of sin

And this one almost works

Suicide Nation
Mass-Appeal, Death-Addiction
Dead but dreaming

 

[D Mullholand]

strange tent, dull-eyed freaks
weight throwers sweating fiercely
black box in camera

 

[Heliologue]

coffee cup, white foam/
filter, black beans, silver steam,
iv'ry eyes, dark rings

 

[xfer]

A haiku don't rhyme,
but then again neither did
Ecto's poetry.

 

[ezekiel]

you're thread still wasn't
topped because i beat
you to it again

 

[azal]

Crows outside my window
Pizza man rings the door bell
As I cup my balls