You didn't mention anything you did on the bass? I only sent DI so you had to have done some processing on it.
I remember hearing Loren's vocals when he posted them, and definitely the uninteligibility was there before the mix, probably just a bad mic choice I guess.
I have to add about the bass, that I feel I could've done a much better job at it rhythmically, specially now after hearing the final drums. The backing track I recorded too had the programmed drums which were I have to say pretty dull rhythmic wise, and since I found myself struggling with the dull drums in trying to be rhythmically creative with the bass as I tend to do, so out of a bit of frustration and thinking it's just a joke song and nobody gives a fuck about the basslines in it, I decided to just go straight with the guitars.
Now after hearing it with the real drums, I feel the bass could've given so much more to the song if I would've put more effort (or would've had the real drums to track to). Just felt I had to say it, although as said before, it's just a joke song and nobody cares about the bass.
Btw I already confirmed it was me who did the bass, so you can take out the doubt hahaha My real name is Daniel Luces