Progressive groove idea, vocals anybody?

[deely]

Hi guys,

I've recorded recently some new ideas. Groovy, progressive, a bit electronic... You can hear them here:



I was thinking - maybe there's anybody willing to add vocals to it? If so, let me know!

 

[Scott Horner]

I like this; it's groovy as fuck! I think the drums could be beefed up a bit to match the guitars but the idea is really cool.

 

[Sam Bottner]

get that snare outta here

 

[oroinvictus]

The drums are way too dry and quiet. Cymbals are nearly inaudible for most of the song. Synth could use some 'verb or a widener, it sounds very dry and doesn't lend much to the mix.

 

[Fael]

Middle part sucked ass but the rest of the song is fucking cool. I absolutely love the guitar tone. I'd bring up the drums a bit and lose a lot of the jangly electronic shit.

 

[deely]

I was trying to improve drums a bit, and here goes a new version:

http://snd.sc/fyBjWL or http://dl.dropbox.com/u/68894/umc/deely_Missing Coast.mp3

Also changed this electronic part a bit (made it shorter for you ;-) )
Huge thanks for your feedback, it's very helpful!
If you got more tips, suggestions - I'm happy to hear any criticism!

 

[MAXMEDLOW]

i think the hihat is closed...open that son of a bitch!

 

[deely]

i think the hihat is closed...open that son of a bitch!

It's stuck

 

[deely]

A small remix of this song: