Recent work! want opinions on the levels and tones

[DJdisaster]

I mix on horribly in accutrate speakers and when I test it on other systems such as my car or some headphones the bass always comes out different so i was looking for some opinions here
and some overall help would really be appreciated

SD2.0 drums, and slate kick
PODXT guitars ESP LTD F-50 stock pickups
DI bass -> vst
SM57 Vocals

First one is just a sample I was putting together (quadtracked)
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/10573333/sample 4.mp3


Second one is a local band who was looking for some recordings (double tracked)
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/10573333/ACCOUNT.mp3

 

[DJdisaster]

just realized some of SD2.0's samples weren't fully loaded for the second song

 

[qwe1234]

the first one sounds really nice, but IMO the guitars sound a bit too dark
and i think the vocals are a bit too loud in some parts

 

[DJdisaster]

thank you =]]
and in my defense i was going for super dark =P
also, I'm going to blame the vocal leveling on my speakers when its actualy just me sucking at it

 

[Sam Bottner]

vocals in the first one are SOOOO bad jesus

 

[DJdisaster]

love the constructive criticism