Hey man, I really enjoy your songwriting. Nothing wrong with some well-written djent... certainly more interesting to listen to than endless thrash and melodeath rehashes!
Checked this song out again and you've got a little "BAUOOOW!" action going on at the first riff, but still a way to go to take on Vildhjärta's "BAUOOOW!" Sick shit...
Uh, I know this post is REALLY late, and I'm probably bumping a really old thread, but there's quite a bit of pumping in this mix. You can hear it especially since the first kick hit is always way louder than the ones that follow. You probably need to use slightly different compression settings on the master channel? It's chocking your mix everytime the kick cuts in.
I know this ones REALLY old, but since a pumping question was asked, and I could hear it very clearly on my DT770 pros, thought I'd tell you.
Sick ass guitar tone though And nice mix, just probably check on the pumping since it's very evident. Quite surprised no one else spotted this!