Second mix of my Vortech stuff, this time with vocals! (Industrial metal)

[Torniojaws]

Alright, now I'm starting to be happy about the mix. Please do comment if you feel so

http://koti.mbnet.fi/juhau/core-vox.mp3 (1.23 MB, 0:45)

Vocals are done by Lukas Pearsall (ex-Kivimetsän Druidi). On the album, there will also be vocals by a second person, plus me.

 

[Jackal_Strain]

The drums sound very fake, but I've got a feeling that's the sound you went for. The whole mix could use some more low end, but I dig the cold atmosphere you've achieved.
I kinda dig it.

 

[JeffTD]

I'd like the hear the vocals a bit wider/more upfront - sounds like they're heavily verbed, but it also sounds narrow to my ears.

 

[KeithRT99]

the vocals need some work - they could be more upfront and in your face. they sound weak. they sound amateur compared to the rest of the stuff. the kicks overpower the mix at parts. drums also sound fake.

 

[Torniojaws]

drums also sound fake.

It's more in the industrial style, so they don't even need to sound real

Unfortunately there's not much I can do about the vocals in the source, since they were recorded in a completely different place (feature vocals) and with not-so-hot gear, and I wasn't even there You reckon some harmonic exciter or such would help them?

Here's a sample of the vocal track as-is from the original recording:

http://koti.mbnet.fi/juhau/closurevox.mp3