the new Gillette shaving.. thing..

[Profanity]

emo kids would of* been quite delighted with that i assume

*have

- you don't want to get into bad habits.

 

[Muffin]

REAL men use ROCKS

 

[CliffBurton]

*have

- you don't want to get into bad habits.

bad habits like being an annoying grammer nazi prick?

 

[Profanity]

ARE
you don't either

Mine was obviously a typing error, his is poor grammatical usage.

 

[TheSeldomlaid]

Mine was obviously a typing error, his is poor grammatical usage.

Yet, funnily enough, him > you.

 

[Profanity]

Yet, funnily enough, him > you.

I won't be able to sleep now, i'll be having a laughing fit all night.

 

[Leandro]

Yet, funnily enough, HIM > you.

fixed

 

[Leandro]

i hope someone nukes manchester, haha
i cant believe that the genetic pool spawned such a creature as you
it was a fluke im sure, and therefore you must be erased from the gene pool

 

[Profanity]

i hope someone nukes manchester, haha
i cant believe that the genetic pool spawned such a creature as you
it was a fluke im sure, and therefore you must be erased from the gene pool

Well after reading that i've come to the conclusion that you'll never make it as a poet.

 

[CliffBurton]

 

[TheSeldomlaid]

fixed

That actually fits too.

 

[Profanity]

strange......i never wanted to be one anyway...

So why post self written poetry?

 

[Profanity]

i hope someone nukes manchester, haha
i cant believe that the genetic pool spawned such a creature as you
it was a fluke im sure, and therefore you must be erased from the gene pool

Nice rhyming scheme though - Nuke/Fluke, pool/you and nice imagery of the pool and monster. You also put in good description "genetic" but still you're lacking in various poetic devices and it's hardly likely to entertain literary enthusiasts.

 

[Profanity]

the way you start each sentence and the amount of imagery you put in suggest that it's a poem.

 

[Leandro]

^That actually nullifies your point

 

[Profanity]

^That actually nullifies your point

Thank you for sharing your opinion.

 

[Leandro]

The opinion of god is naturally fact.

 

[Profanity]

The opinion of god is naturally fact.

Are you telling me you hear voices?

 

[Leandro]

Are you telling me you hear voices?

Then i'd say that the opinion of a schizofrenic man is fact

 

[Profanity]

So you're God?