What do you guys think about this intro?

[DanLights]

Hey man, I'm really digging on these vsti's at the moment, they've got a piano vst called - acoustik keyz and it sounds pretty good, as well as a whole host of free vsts for strings, brass, that sound comparitively very good for their size (usually 16-30mb each) and of course their price (free!)

coincidentially, the ambient synth vsti in the background of my intro in the OP is the Darkness theory plugin from this list, I haven't checked the other plugins from this guy, I'm downloading now, thanks

 

[slayercannibalsuffohead]

Well, if ya wanna keep that piano tune, as a few said here, it needs a shit ton of ambience, and I would drown it out with screaming school kids and circus music, maybe some gun shots and alike, that may take away the oddly sounding vibe that is happening and sound more kinda evil and sick like.