What do you guys think of this?

[ChildOfADown]

http://rapidshare.de/files/13197706/Song_1.MID.html

This a riff i wrote. What do you think? is it good? does it suck (i wouldn't be suprised, its the first time i compose)?
The sound is shit because its MIDI.

 

[Black Core]

I'm sorry to say, it sucks
You should try to put more variaty in the song and make it slower perhaps

 

[ChildOfADown]

i was trying to do speed metal... Are you sure I should make it slower?

no need to be sorry. This is the first song ive ever written.

Could you give me a bit of advice? Thx

 

[Black Core]

Well if you're trying to make speedmetal, don't make it slower but do try to put some variaty in it like I said before. Try a drumsolo in it

 

[ChildOfADown]

k, ill try. thx

 

[Black Core]

No problem, let me hear the result once you're done

 

[Matt]

yeah, like bc said spice it up some.