What's wrong with my mix? (Metalcore)

[Deebo]

This is my first real attempt at recording and mixing "it's just a joke song my band did". Everything doesn't feel like they sit in the mix properly. Can anyone make some suggestions on how to clean it up a bit. Any and all suggestions are appreciated. Thanks. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/11168897/MNMB.wav

 

[JamesNorman]

Its in the wrong section for starters.... try the rate my mix subforum, youll get the answers there.

 

[Deebo]

Well I posted it there last night and got nothing. So i thought since i really wasnt trying to have it rated but more have people listen and help me with the mixing process, it might belong here. Sorry man.