WIP New Rock Song X50, Slate

[jauernis]

This is a work in progress, no leads yet but just wanted a review of how the song is so far, what's lacking, what could be better

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=901592&songID=10599668

 

[jauernis]

Bump..... you can tell me take a hike it sucks....just want some feedback..anything lol

 

[Hypocrazy]

Guitars need a little bit of reverberation, imho. They sound rather dry in comparison to vocals and drums.

 

[Nuno Filipe]

The guitars sound thin and weak, they are not blending well with the bass.

 

[Mago]

The guitars sound thin and weak, they are not blending well with the bass.

yep...I'd dich them and rework them from scratch tbh
when it started I thought "cool kind of telephone effect on the guitars"...but then it didnt stop^^

 

[Nuno Filipe]

yep...I'd dich them and rework them from scratch tbh
when it started I thought "cool kind of telephone effect on the guitars"...but then it didnt stop^^

Lol, Yeah exactly the same here but the first time I was playing the song in Lo fi so the telephone effect was even more cool! ahah

 

[jauernis]

Thanks everyone!! Yeah got that feeling when I was listening in the car today thanks! Will rework the guitars from the ground up. You guys digging the song?

 

[grywolf627]

Hey Steve! Just finally saw this. I agree about the guitars. It sounds like a cool effect...but it last through the whole song. About the song though, I like it. It's maybe not as strong as some of your other songs (that I'm still waiting to hear finished!!), but definitely has potential.