A Yard Lit by a Fall

PlatypusJesus

A Dead Sun Serenity
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A Yard Lit by a Fall

A back yard
With the playthings of a child scattered about
Resting peacefully near the road
A tiny pink bicycle
Its wheels worn from flying up and down a cracked sidewalk
And its body scratched from skidding tumbles
Which soon after, a loving giant came running
And scooped it back up

Lying in the center of the yard
A tattered and torn rag doll
With stuffing seeping out of its head
Which was caused by what seemed to be an insignificant fall from a tree’s peak
The same loving giant who scooped up the bicycle
Made an attempt to remedy its head with a needle and some thread
But the gash was just too large
And life ran away, but the doll still remained

Beside the doll
The drawings and scribbles of a child sit
Animals and wonders of another world
Which the clouds above display to wide-open eyes
One drawing seems to stand out
One not of imagination, but one of compassion and affection
Which when seen by the loving giant from before
Brought a tender smile to his face as a benign tear ran down his rosy cheeks

And to the very far right of the yard
A deep black shadow relaxes on swaying grass
Above is a petite giggling girl
Her eyebrows bouncing up and down on her forehead
Overjoyed by the magnificent ride her swing provides
She continues going higher, reaching for the gleaming sun
She makes it to the uppermost point, as tall as a tree
And she lets go…

In the air, her body begins to twirl
She dances and spins with the breeze that is created
A little awkward though
Like a ballerina performing in her first show
And the sun’s light reflects off of her bright green eyes
As she finishes her play, the final one for this time
The grass seems to applaud her act, a standing ovation
And she takes a bow…

She hit the ground with a gentle thud
Her neck snapped, her head cracked
And blood poured out, forming a stream to the road
Still locked onto her face was a smile, and her arms still reaching for the sun
A leaf from some far off tree
Pranced over and crumbled on her chest
Then rain from the weeping sky began to fall
And washed away all signs of pain

A car drives up and parks in the garage
Out steps a man and he looks around the flooded yard
Where he usually sees his little girl running and hopping
Then she sees him and greets him with a hug around his leg
He looks over to the right, the point of impact
And he sees the child which he has nurtured
And the only human dear to his heart
Sleeping instead of playing

He runs to her side and places her head on his knee
Softly he raises it up a little more and wraps his shirt around the cut
His throat becomes sore as he tries to maintain his sanity
She feels cold; he picks her up into his arms
And whispers hoarsely into her ear, “I love you.
Breathe, please. I’ll never let you go.”
He then notices the drawing of him and her, hand-in-hand
And a tear streaks down his cheek as the ink runs away

The man never left his house since that day
He took her inside and laid her limp body on her bed
Then he walked over to his chair and sat down
He cried himself to sleep and never awoke
Outside, above the bloodstained grass, the swing still waved with the wind
The drawings and scribbles were faded into random blotches, like clouds
The bicycle still lingered near the road, with nothing to scoop it back up
And the rag doll still lied lifeless, waiting to be released and set free
 
i think i witnessed some of that during the drive through arkansas...:lol:

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LoM, how many things do you write, like in a given week? Just curious.

I thought it was beautiful. However, those laughies are very deceiving.
 
Not a lot. Right now I'm trying to develop a couple of stories that I am working on, so that is the first thing I have written in a few weeks. Plus, school keeps me busy and away from the pen. Usually, I just go on a random writing spree and write like three things in a day or so.
 
Woah, I totally just went into whiny bitch mode and wrote this:
Perpetual Mourning Within Seclusion

Here they lie before me
Choices, boundaries
A trembling hand
To actually know, to actually love
Never felt
No one by my side, to hold
To confide in
It has always been this way, and I fear it will remain the same
Solitude, everlasting
No connection, no desire
No passion
There’s no one crying on my shoulder
No one there to find the mystery
Within my heart
So deep, so wide
So open, but there’s no one to listen
I put on the smile
Inside and out
Always laughing, never crying
Never depressed
But now I think, whom do I have
No one, no one to help me with the choices
No one to guide me towards the light
So much time alone, to think
To dream, to fantasize
But no reality, no truth
A heroine, save me
Compassion, someone
Anyone to find me, to finally see this well inside me
A well which is full
And ready to be dipped into
One by one questioned
But all of the answers are the same
Maybe someone is there for me
And just this thought receives a nervous shiver
But no one has yet to appear
What is it that I do not contain?
What is it that they do not see?
Now the questions rise up even more in my mind
Everyday they expand a little more
Seeking answers to the whys
To the whats
But nothing is ever discovered
How much longer can I go without this which everyone else around me knows?
I don’t even know what it is like
No experience
And they laugh, they laugh when you do not know
How lucky they truly are
To be able to laugh
Yet they betray each other
Everyday
They’ve always had it; they don’t appreciate it
They jump from one to the next
Without any consideration
They cheat; they steal
They lie
In what they call love
They only give pain, only malice
And I still sit alone
Waiting, wading in the clear waters
Looking for the one to grasp my soul
To take me into serenity within her eyes
To go beyond the boundaries
And colors of the human mind
To enter a world of beauty, of benevolence
To fill every crevice of my spirit
My imagination creates this image
But time and time again
I awake, to only notice the void is still there
Just as infinite as before
 
Earth’s Smoldered Embers
O heavenly sky
Crystalline diamonds you cry,
And when they hit the light just right
They crack…

O serene lake
Languid waves you quake,
And when they pour onto the shore
They foam…

O salubrious ground
Alluring flowers you found,
And when they pray to the sun’s rays
They bloom…

Now all of these three
Can clearly see
Man’s rancor…

And when the rainbow,
A bridge o’er the lake below,
Formed from the colors of the ground’s flowers
Reflected off of the sky’s diamond showers,
Is clutched by man’s touch
It fades…
 
I liked all three LoM. All different.

My imagination creates this image
But time and time again

I awake, to only notice the void is still there
Just as infinite as before


I didn't see anything remotely whiny about the second one. It was honesty.

What's up with this font? I think it's LoM's fault.
 
Revision to one that I posted a while back:
Face to Live

Peering over the horizon
Fiery solace beaming down
Approaching a citadel
Ravenous snakes poison my veins
The ground starts to disintegrate into oblivion
The abyss consumes my soul
All color fades, all light disappears
Time stops, and rewinds
Memories hidden deep inside
Confessions of innocence lost, beyond my will
Running, sorrow and bliss reside in my desolation
Sanctuary to asylum, yet no freedom do I find
Human to mortal, yet no empathy
Abuse me
Treading into eternal darkness
My only will is to die
Poke me, drain the life
Peering over the horizon
Fiery solace beaming down
Approaching a citadel
Ravenous snakes poison my veins
The ground starts to disintegrate into oblivion
The abyss consumes my soul
All color fades, all light disappears
Time stops, and fast forwards
Reforming, becoming, but the pain still remains
Look into my eyes, and see my reverie of fear
Face me