Originally posted by _Transparent_
Dazzled by her fragile scent
Eternity seems too embrace
Originally posted by godisanathiest
Gah I mean too, as in 2 short or sumthing. Oh well And we're skipping tenses a bit here but:
Dazzled by her fragile scent
Eternity seems to embrace the night
As she danced, forever
Originally posted by _Transparent_
, even by my standards thats poor, maybe thats why i didnt do well at English As.
Originally posted by godisanathiest
Mayb u should hand this in to the teacher and see what they say?