Another Poetry Game, only one word at a time please.

[Juggie]

tearing

 

[Obyeybyeogone]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories

(I say instead of just saying the word, paste the whole poem so far and add your word at the end, that way it's easier to add to the poem and get a feel for how your word will look, I actually think this poem is coming along quite nicely) O, and my word was assuming tearing meant releasing salty water, not ripping paper, but I suppose you can look at it either way, if you have something that works after memories and tearing means tearing paper apart then go for it.

 

[S4R]

Originally posted by Oyo
(I say instead of just saying the word, paste the whole poem so far and add your word at the end, that way it's easier to add to the poem and get a feel for how your word will look, I actually think this poem is coming along quite nicely) O, and my was assuming tearing meant releasing salty water, not ripping paper, but I suppose you can look at it either way, if you have something that works after memories and tearing means tearing paper apart then go for it.

Yes, everyone do this from now on.

 

[S4R]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories


hide....

 

[Obyeybyeogone]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast




(I really didn't understand if you wanted 'hide' as a new train of thought or a continuation of in tearing memories, feel free to correct it)

 

[Ihsahn]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast

Enigmas

 

[Obyeybyeogone]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The ..........

(Enigmas, very nice choice)

 

[Ihsahn]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The ..........

Sepulchral

 

[Ihsahn]

ok I just had to add this.

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral...

Throes

 

[Morningrise]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes.....

destroy

 

[S4R]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy

innocence....

 

[HoserHellspawn]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence

Vanquishing....

 

[TyrantOfFlames]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation....

 

[E V I L]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses....

 

[transfixed]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness...

 

[S4R]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden....

 

[RETIREDTrapped]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath....

 

[Johan]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers....


This is the worst poem I've ever read

 

[Russell]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of

 

[RETIREDTrapped]

Tears drown me
As painful oblivion
Sucks my void of seclusion
Attacked and pulled knives
from old pulsating wounds
in tearing memories hide vast enigmas
The sepulchral Throes destroy innocence
Vanquishing salvation kisses darkness
Hidden beneath embers of nothingness