anyone want to critique the mix here and/or try their hand at mastering?

[TreKita]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8713215

that's the song, hope you enjoy it, because i really am happy with how it sounds


i've already been told the sub drop that i put in for lolz was RIDICULOUSLY too loud, and I'm sorting that out.

otherwise, critique away gents.

 

[dasbrootal]

yeah, the bass drop is a bit much. i'd highpass the cymbals a bit more as they have too much midrange for my taste. the ride / bell sounds straight up silly, unless that's there for effect. the kick drum is a bit too upfront and the guitars could use a bit more clarity.