tempestadiossa
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use are all shit, "to kill me by your left toe"!!!!!!
fucken retard.
Your constructive criticism is really helping.
use are all shit, "to kill me by your left toe"!!!!!!
fucken retard.
use are all shit, "to kill me by your left toe"!!!!!!
fucken retard.
It's still the best we got so far.
Suggestions and corrections are very welcome.Code:[B]Banned from Heaven (revised lyrics)[/B] [I]It's a call in the dark and I shout the night the angel falls [COLOR=Red]-> not sure about "the night"[/COLOR] but you probably knew that all was lost Did you think that I would cry now at something I have lost Slit with the knife if I can not be [COLOR=Red]-> not sure about "slit with the knife"[/COLOR] Yaow! I blame myself for every second that I put myself through standing for the only one, for you there shall be blood, a toll Why did you cut and gut me out? I was the one who sold Mind, body and soul to the devil Nor did I know when I signed I am the one with light [COLOR=Red]-> not sure about "with light"[/COLOR] Since when we spoke I sleep with fire Wake up, in a pool of blood Locked up, when you get banned from Heaven Looking at me, she saw me dripping down blood [COLOR=Red]->[/COLOR] [COLOR=Red]not sure about "at me, she"[/COLOR] Don't worry, I'll get up to get down where I belong[/I]
Seems to be the most correct one to me. The "I am one with light" seems incorrect somehow. I think "with light" is actually something else. Other than that, everything else looks right.
"you all blow" not "use all blow"
No, you must use all blow so that you can blow no more
*Wake up, in a pool of blood*
Locked up, when you get banned from Heaven
Looking at me, she saw me dripping down blood -> not sure about "at me, she"
Don't worry, I'll get up to get down where I belong
I'm hearing this * as:
"I can't (don't?) see the point of life"
Anyone else hear it like this?
Wake up in a pool of blood
Looked up, where you get banned from heaven
Looking down, just saw me dripping down blood
Don't worry, I'll get up to get down where I belong