Benighted

Originally posted by Static
Please elaborate.

Allow me. I will use Benighted as an example. One of the things I most dearly love about Opeth is the layering of multiple tracks. This is represented in many forms throughout their career. In Morningrise and Orchid, there were always two guitars and usually a base playing different parts at the same time, in MAYH it was usually two guitars playing different chords, focussing more on the texture rather than the story of the music, (not to be confused with te story of the lyrics), in Still Life and BWP it was a mix of these. The point is that their longer, (more serious?), songs tend to be markedly layered; they are also progressive as you all know. Both of these things, the mellow songs are not. Benighted uses a single guitar throughout most of the song, no dums, no bass. Mike's voice is only harmonized in three short instances, and the song progresses very little. The guitar part is definitely "pretty" but certainly not spectacular, and it is easily forgettable. The only really memorable thing about the song is Mike's vocals, particularly "What came and distorted your sight, saw you benighted by your pride." Now this sounds very reminiscent of songs that are played on soft and alternative rock stations, no? It is not just the structure that makes this song commercial sounding to me. It is the content of the song. To me this song only has one purpose, to be "pretty," not to be memorable, to be innovative, or to be spectacular. I think that if Opeth are going to make a chorus/verse song, they need to make it complex at least in layering. The fact is that the simple songs are usually the ones that die first; why do you think people get sick of songs on the radio?
 
Originally posted by TyrantOfFlames
Mike's voice is only harmonized in three short instances, and the song progresses very little. The guitar part is definitely "pretty" but certainly not spectacular, and it is easily forgettable. The only really memorable thing about the song is Mike's vocals, particularly "What came and distorted your sight, saw you benighted by your pride." Now this sounds very reminiscent of songs that are played on soft and alternative rock stations, no? It is not just the structure that makes this song commercial sounding to me. It is the content of the song. To me this song only has one purpose, to be "pretty," not to be memorable, to be innovative, or to be spectacular. I think that if Opeth are going to make a chorus/verse song, they need to make it complex at least in layering. The fact is that the simple songs are usually the ones that die first; why do you think people get sick of songs on the radio?

I think you're too demanding a fan. Benighted isn't supposed to be a spectactular, complex epic. It's a simple, catchy, and yes "pretty" song, and it works perfectly fine as it is. Why do all of their songs have to be these tremendous pieces of music? It seems like Mike wanted to just make a simple song that flows well and is pleasing to your ears, so what's wrong with that? Perhaps adding more layers and whatnot would ruin the intended feel he wanted the song to have... being the simplistic, catchy song it is.
 
I agree with Cynical on this one. I think you are missing the point of the acoustic songs. They are not meant to be huge amazing epics. They're whole purpose is to be a break in the action, a nice, pretty little distraction. As this they work just fine. You say they are not made to be spectacular...exactly. Do they really need to be?
 
All of Opeth's acoustic songs are amazing, it's a part of what makesd Opeth Opeth in my opinion. If they were to stop having acoustic songs in their albums I think i'd go mad!
 
its such a beautiful song to play i think. i need to learn how to sing.

i read the lyrics seriously hard when i wanted to use it for an english exam, and i realised how talented opeth are at writing lyrics. their sentence and rhyming structure is beautiful, and i got a bit emotional just from reading them. it is now my 3rd favourite acoustic opeth song behind to bid you farewell and still day.
 
Actually I agree with the orginal poster to an extent.

The song is set up in a very mellow and kinda dual way. The chorus verse structure usually dont bother me to much but in this song is just sounds to repetitive.

Fav mellow tracks
1. To Bid You Farewell
2. Still Day Beneath the Sun
3. Credence
4. Patterns in the Ivy 2

harvest is just another mellow track that doesnt do anything for me. Both are good songs though.
 
Originally posted by City_of_da_Moon
hey YAYO!!!! can u please send links for ur songs....cos i got a new computer and lost ur songs along with the old one! please
thanx!
Links are in my sig. If you happen to have signatures turned off or something then here they are:

My solo project:
http://www.mp3.com/Dave_Caswell
(its possible that forestall may disappear from this page for a week or so due to me stuffing around with some stuff, but maybe not, if it does disappear itll be back up within a week or so) - yep just checked, only Softly is up, so you'll have to wait while the songs are reapproved!

My band:
http://home.iprimus.com.au/dcaswell/Unthroned_-_An_Empire_Torn.mp3
 
i shall reply later, because my views are different to what Tyrant was takling about. But im busy now. :P
 
Originally posted by Poison Godmachine
Zuh? Aside from the intro and outro credance has 2 parts, chorus and verse. Much fewer parts then Benighted and harvest.
Yeh, I sort of got mixed up with what I was saying. The typing wasn't matching my thoughts :). I meant that songs like Benighted & Harvest etc. have three verses/choruses with the same riffs, whereas Credence is less of a verse-chorus format - there are no repeated lyrics like the choruses of Benighted and Harvest. Sorry :grin:.
 
Originally posted by TyrantOfFlames
Allow me. I will use Benighted as an example. One of the things I most dearly love about Opeth is the layering of multiple tracks. This is represented in many forms throughout their career. In Morningrise and Orchid, there were always two guitars and usually a base playing different parts at the same time, in MAYH it was usually two guitars playing different chords, focussing more on the texture rather than the story of the music, (not to be confused with te story of the lyrics), in Still Life and BWP it was a mix of these. The point is that their longer, (more serious?), songs tend to be markedly layered; they are also progressive as you all know. Both of these things, the mellow songs are not. Benighted uses a single guitar throughout most of the song, no dums, no bass. Mike's voice is only harmonized in three short instances, and the song progresses very little. The guitar part is definitely "pretty" but certainly not spectacular, and it is easily forgettable. The only really memorable thing about the song is Mike's vocals, particularly "What came and distorted your sight, saw you benighted by your pride." Now this sounds very reminiscent of songs that are played on soft and alternative rock stations, no? It is not just the structure that makes this song commercial sounding to me. It is the content of the song. To me this song only has one purpose, to be "pretty," not to be memorable, to be innovative, or to be spectacular. I think that if Opeth are going to make a chorus/verse song, they need to make it complex at least in layering. The fact is that the simple songs are usually the ones that die first; why do you think people get sick of songs on the radio?
Now this is kinda saying the difference between the short acoustic songs and the larger songs, but i dont think those differences are necessarily a bad thing because they go against what the song is trying to achieve. Benighted is supposed to be simplistic, its supposed to fairly 'empty' and such. Layering would change what the song was about. The problem i have with the songs is that they havent replaced their songwriting techniques with ones appropriate to smaller acoustic songs, they simply cut out the ones that werent appropriate.

So i shall elaborate myself.

Benighted....

Song Structure = (Intro - Verse - Chorus - Verse - Chorus - Interlude - Solo - Chorus - Verse - Outro)
This is VERY standard and cliched.. i dont believe its appropriate for the song. Such a song should be structured differently for sure, and verse/chorus can be used wisely in this music, but i think the structure they chose is too repetative (when i play the song i can never get through the 3rd verse... ), though this is emphasised by the below points.

Now break each of those parts down, and you'll find a very standard 2 or 4 times for each riff (except interlude is 3 times. and that riff happens to be my favourite from the whole song). Very standard.

Now look at how these riffs are repeated. Take the verse for example, the first and second time are exactly the same. Take the intro, all 4 times are played note for note the same. And so on for almost every riff i believe (except very very small changes that achieve very little).

Now look at the verse riff, which in itself has a repeated fingerpicked part on E-minor..

The fingerpicking patterns are pretty much the same they always use, and doesnt have much variety.

etc
etc

Ok im gonna stop here. But i think ive shown enough to make my claim. There is very little art expressed in these songs. These acoustic songs act purely as a blank canvas. By simply looking at how riffs are repeated, and song structure, at different production, at varied vocal lines, etc etc etc they could have controlled the emotion in subtle ways, with songs such as these its subtlety thats important. Why repeat a riff without change four times in a row? You see opeth get away with this stuff in their main songs because their art is mainly expressed through the changes between riffs, or within a single time through a riff.... then they repeat that riff 4 times and nobody notices because soon enough the feel has changed again. But it doesnt work for acoustic songs, there will be people who still like the song, but many will lose interest, and many will be bored from the start.

Their acoustic songs are so plain and undeveloped, there are far far better writers of acoustic songs. Take a look at Chris Brown (Analog Kid from these forums), have a listen to his demos, they're different of course, but they display the skills that can be used in unlayered stuff. Sure opeth's songs are nice, but id guess about 50% of the guitarists on this forum could write something just as good, its not hard to write an emotional blank canvas song that has no hidden detail, the only thing that some people mightnt manage is of course the vocals and the chord use which is quite well developed.

nice enough? sure, if a friend played me that tune id say it was nice.. but i mean really, they arent anything special. Like there are some great emotional moments in the song, but ill gaurantee you the ones i get emotion from are the ones that only occur once, and arent completely standard. (like the solos, the solos are great... )

If you enjoy the songs then all good and well, im not saying you shouldnt, i can enjoy a lot of simple music, sometimes it is the best thing. But im hardly going to give it much praise, or defend it. I just expect more from Opeth i guess.
 
Most of Opeth's songs are composed in a complex structure..What makes Benighted special is it's simplicity..Sparse, in the singer songwriter tradition it is an emotional song ..I've listened to Benighted in my darkest hour, late at night before I went to sleep.."Came and disorted your sight, saw you benighted by your fright"..(I hope those are the lyrics)..I like the song Benighted, like a hand in the dark in your lonely room, as Mke invites you in his world from your darkness and despair..It is not a pop song in the annoying ideal but an unassuming acoustic intimate moment where Mike reaches out to someone in thier depair, perhaps yours? Hails..-l-
 
What, i take the time to make that reply and then theres no real arguments against my post? Hmm, im sure someone must have something to say....
 
Originally posted by YaYoGakk
What, i take the time to make that reply and then theres no real arguments against my post? Hmm, im sure someone must have something to say....
Why should I argue with you?? You don't like cheese or pie.

But yes, I agree with what you're saying, only I reckon I enjoy Benighted more than you because I care about the layering less.
 
The guitar part is definitely "pretty" but certainly not spectacular, and it is easily forgettable.

Forgettable? HA! I can tell you are not a guitarist, by the way you dismiss seemingly simple riffs. Don't judge a song unless you can play it - only then can you appreciate benighted's beauty