Neonblackdreamer said:
Neonblackdreamer said:Check out my band!
Intelligent modern heavy metal!
rahvin said:i assume you won't be reading this, but you should really work on having some decent translation, at least on the first page of your site. "this demo literarily knocked me down" is especially embarrassing. not that i would condone anybody saying "this demo literally knocked me down", either, unless you sent the guy a remote-controlled cd that made him trip and fall. but that's a different subject.
i'm willing to correct all that stuff for free if you're interested.
Neonblackdreamer said:That sentence came out of the translation of an Italian review...
Thank you a lot for your correction offer, maybe you could shoot me an email?
rahvin said:i gape, almost in total abhorrence.