Crit this poster design?

[professorlamp]

NOTE: read on, this is not a shameless plug

So anyway a few of you may have seen this, but I've only had one issue raised by one person so far and the recommendation was to ditch the mic list and instead say what services I offer i.e Tracking/mixing etc...

But I'd assume that's obvious from the title description?
Also this is the 'web' upload (its a smaller file size) so the text is just ever so slightly blurry compared to the one which I'm going to print out and post around like there's no tomorrow

These were all done as favours so I can't really go back to the guy that designed the poster and give him a thousand suggestions (seems a bit rude) so only the important stuff will get looked at.

What say you, services or mic list?

 

[crazykarl]

Services. It's more familiar to the average musician.

 

[TheDriller]

Services. It's more familiar to the average musician.

Yup.

potential clients aren't going to care about your mic list.

focus on what you're offering them in return for their cashmoney, not what stuff you've got.

 

[Jarkko Mattheiszen]

Font choice doesn't work. Also, as already stated, ditch the gear list. It's usually not a good move to make a big deal about your gear if it isn't exactly high-end stuff and even less if there isn't a whole lot of it.

 

[JayB]

I agree with different font , and change gear to services.

 

[professorlamp]

Suggestions noted and being changed, cheers guys

 

[muckypup1]

Yup.

potential clients aren't going to care about your mic list.

focus on what you're offering them in return for their cashmoney, not what stuff you've got.

+1

Well I'm a geek, so I would want to see and know about these mics and gear, but for your average band, they just know how to press record and then they have a song so a services list would be better!

 

[pipaguapique]

let them know that if they record with you they will become rockstars instantly...