Damn My heart

[LIZ METAL]

I hear a distant rainbow
He's upset over my silence
I seem lost in this void
So vast my heart
How to fill and cover the silence?
I'm ashamed, but to remain at distance
More further than we were before?
I know I should stop building castles in the air
They crumble so easily
Like sand through the hourglass in my heart
Peace has been broken between....
How can I repair what was?
What apologies in what language could heal the wounds??
Damn my heart which lost its faith outside
Damn my mind which built me a fabled world
Damn my hand for writing sensless things
Damn my self destruction for not letting people understand
so who am I to speak?

 

[Deadly Embrace]

Sounds like your in love Liz, maybe you should send this to your Rainbow & they will understand more in writing, than your silence?

 

[LIZ METAL]

Not in love DE...more like trying to rereach a friend....Hopefully I'll get a smile out of him again....

 

[Deadly Embrace]

I was Close..............................but you must care alot to write & post it...................?

 

[LIZ METAL]

yes...I made a mistake in the form of silence.....trying to fix a friendship.....

 

[Deadly Embrace]

Show this thread, it may help.................?

 

[LIZ METAL]

Hopefully he already has....he goes on this board

 

[glennsmetal]

Hey Liz,

Can I throw in some advice to you. I have made some errors in judgment this last year as you know, and after finiding out she's getting married to this guy I wanted to go back and apologize to both of them but I realize I didn't do anything wrong here and when and if the time comes to make amends or bring him back you'll know. Just don't try too hard, he'll come back to you when he's ready. GURANTEED. Especially after realizing what he's missing.

As for your writing, your really incredible, thank you for sharing, hope I didn't come off soundling like a jerk, I'm the last one who should be giving advice to anyone.

GLENN