FEMALE FRONTED ROCK GROUP! (Only 2 girls, both 17!)

I honestly think the problem with the vocals is the performance. They don't seem very forceful, like they were singing in a public room and were trying to keep it down. Get them to come back and really belt that shit out.
 
i think midway through the verse, where the strumming rhythm changes on the guitars, the kick should back it up?
but that might be too metal of an idea :p