Hey guys! Give me some crits on this one (melodic and energy stuff out here)

[Andrew_Anakin]

So i've been mixed this intro and i need to send it to the guys, but i feel like my ears aren't good atm, so i need some crits from you guys!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4k37rmk0n5qzwfy/Intro+snare.mp3

Thank you for any comments on this!

 

[xXxMetalJunkiexXx]

Something doesn't sound right about the rhythm guitars, like it's empty or something.

 

[Andrew_Anakin]

Something doesn't sound right about the rhythm guitars, like it's empty or something.

Yeah, i see.
Maybe it caused by bx shredspread