I Made a Song

[FRUGiHOYi]

http://dm.ucf.edu/~ebuccianti/Shanty of Dreams.mp3
I might still add vocals. What you guys think?

 

[Phormula]

I like it alot, but I think it needs a little more power in the chorus parts.

 

[FRUGiHOYi]

I agree that it could use a little more power in the chorus part and I will probably add some vocals. Thanks for the comments/suggestions.

 

[deliverance]

i liked it, very melancholic at times.

 

[BurningSky]

it was good, obviously very porcupine tree influenced. (or maybe i just think that because i was just listening to porcupine tree right before it)

you should add vocals though to make it a little more interesting, and your lead guitar needs work

This song sounds nothing like porcupine tree at all. Anyway, its one of those songs that could easily have vocals, but things can be done so theyre not necessary. Lead guitar sounds fine by the way, i'd say the rhythm needs some refinement though.

 

[Profanity]

It reminds me of Spanish guitar.

 

[FRUGiHOYi]

This song sounds nothing like porcupine tree at all. Anyway, its one of those songs that could easily have vocals, but things can be done so theyre not necessary. Lead guitar sounds fine by the way, i'd so the rhythm needs some refinement though.

Yeah, because my intention was to have vocals on it from the beginning... the parts between the guitar licks in the verses and during the chorus/acoustic parts were made for vocals. I'll probably record some soon.

 

[JoeVice]

thats pretty sweet man. nice lead playing...the snare sounds pretty weak...but thats not you