Looking for help to improve on guitar tone/overall production

Orion Hellraiser

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Hi!! I'm new to the forum, and I'm seeking for help to improve my game on my songs.

I made this quick song with just riffs that may not have any sense, but it's just to illustrate where I'm standing now in music production:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/2geu7jbes3isgvq/Reddit Test2.mp3?dl=0

So, with that being said, I'd love to know any advices on getting a better guitar tone, if the low ends sucks, if the drums might improve or what I'm doing right? I'd love to hear your comments and I'll gladly take new suggestions and answer any questions you may have.