looking for suggestions on this mix

[seditz740novaprospect]

got money is the song title im working on the vocals now but i want to get this right first

something just seems off to me

guitars 5150 c4 eq 2 tracks each side 57/421 blend
bass- di w/ impulses
drums fl studio and my own samples

me and my friends were messing around and this came out of with i had some friends put some shread on it check it out please

got money is the song title im working on the vocals now but i want to get this right first

www.soundclick.com/seven40studios

 

[seditz740novaprospect]

no one has any suggerstions ,especially on the guitar tone

 

[Erik Monsonis]

Kick drum sounds too fake.
You should use S2.0 for the OH and hats, it sounds much more realistic.

Guitar tone is good but a bit dirty for my taste, too grainy, it's like the new Evergrey sound but with a lot more fuzz on it. Palm mutes sound a bit "broken".
Frequency wise is good but it has a "hole" in low mids and low end.

Keep on

 

[seditz740novaprospect]

Kick drum sounds too fake.
You should use S2.0 for the OH and hats, it sounds much more realistic.

Guitar tone is good but a bit dirty for my taste, too grainy, it's like the new Evergrey sound but with a lot more fuzz on it. Palm mutes sound a bit "broken".
Frequency wise is good but it has a "hole" in low mids and low end.

Keep on

thank you the drum tracks were raw at the time i posted that... the guitar tone was what i was worried about


the drums i had someone come in and play them so i did not have to fuck with programming

 

[Erik Monsonis]

Oh, then i'd suggest some tweaking in the amp/booster gain type. It sounds like you didn't use a TS or similar. I think the 6505 amp needs a TS to sound 100%

 

[seditz740novaprospect]

all raw 5150 nothign else was used there was very little eq going on too thats pretty much as raw as i can get