Lyrics Discussion Thread (do NOT post RRF lyrics)

After reading sulo's heres my update on done with everything die for nothing

Let me bring you down real easy
you've got no room left to run
so you preach over me like i will never know
go on if they want you to
just for your peace of mind
I'm done, not fucking shamed
Don't ever laugh, before you die

Wonder, Wonder why you wander
looking for me-never seen
what the fuck
cant be your servant
I hear Just Let me die
they got too far
so my end
Don't blame me, forget it, let me out
to the fact that i dont care
Or maybe the fact you're blind up there

Take me away
anyway, that's overwith
dont care, I dont care which way
Toss Me Aside
I wont crash
I will never judge
what you've done to me, die for nothing

IM DONE-WANNA DIE!

Take me away
anyway, that's overwith
dont care, I dont care which way
Toss Me Aside
I wont crash
I will never judge
what you've done to me, die for nothing
 
okay i talked to some people and got some messages from people with done with everything die for nothing lyrics so i changed a few more things.....i think this is final though

Let me bring you down real easy
you've got no room left to run
so you preach over me like i will never know
go on if they want you to
just for your peace of mind
I'm done, not fucking shamed
i'd never laugh, before you die

Wonder, Wonder why you wander
looking for me-never seen
What the fuck, give me a second,
Or you just let me be
they got too far
so I hear
Done with me, fuck me-just let me out
To the fact that i dont care
But maybe in fact your my last fear

Take me away
anyway, that's overwith
dont care, I dont care which way
Toss Me Aside
I wont crash
I will never judge
what you've done to me, die for nothing

IM DONE-WANNA DIE!

Take me away
anyway, that's overwith
dont care, I dont care which way
Toss Me Aside
I wont crash
I will never judge
what you've done to me, die for nothing
 
Here are some things I noticed today while listening to Blooddrunk in my car.

On " Smile Pretty For The Devil "...

In the blink of an eye you're flying
Like an angel, ______ smiling
Reborn to all I've always been ( not sure this line is right. )

Five times I've died, it's all the same
Got only myself to blame
Never begged for you to rescue me
Then again, ___________
But you ____ me right _______
Who gives a fuck? I do, that's who!
 
Here are some things I noticed today while listening to Blooddrunk in my car.

On " Smile Pretty For The Devil "...

In the blink of an eye you're flying
Like an angel, ______ smiling
Reborn to all I've always been ( not sure this line is right. )

Five times I've died, it's all the same
Got only myself to blame
Never begged for you to rescue me
Then again, ___________
But you ____ me right _______
Who gives a fuck? I do, that's who!

Good job, seems correct and it also makes sense :kickass:
 
Banned From Heaven v999999

It's a killing that I can now show
When I get in your thoughts
But you probably knew that all was lost

Did you think that I would pray now
It's something I have lost
Swim with the night if I cannot fly

I blame myself for every second
That I put myself through
Standing for the only one, for you
There shall be blood, a toll

Why did you cut me and gut me out?
I was the one who sold
Mind, body and soul to the devil
Little did I know when I joined
I am the one with light
Since that we spoke, I sleep with fire

Wake up, in a pool of blood
Look tough, when you get banned from heaven
Looking now, she saw me dripping down blood
Don't worry, I'll get up, to get down where I belong

Banned from heaven
Banned from heaven
Banned from heaven
Banned from heaven

Wake up, in a pool of blood
Look tough, when you get banned from heaven
Looking now, she saw me dripping down blood
Don't worry, I'll get up, to get down where I belong

Wake up, in a pool of blood
Look tough, when you get banned from heaven
Looking now, she saw me dripping down blood
Don't worry, I'll get up, to get down where I belong


I only changed two lines, because that is what I always bounce back between in the song. Otherwise, I think it's like 99% correct. I'll do roadkill morning after I get back from drinking tonight... or maybe I should wait :p
 
are you kidding?
99%?

no offense... but that's less than 30%..
doesn't mean you did a bad job.. but i'm pretty sure, that's NOT it.
 
"wasted again - decide or play with faith"
"degenerate blooddrunk with your razorblade"

The chorus sounds to me like this:
Blooddrunk, wasted again
Any sign of pain will fade
Blooddrunk, you're going insane
Dengenerate blooddrunk
With your razor blade

And this:

Wake up, in a pool of blood
Look tough, when you get banned from heaven
Looking now, she saw me dripping down blood
Don't worry, I'll get up, to get down where I belong

Sounds like:

Wake up, in a pool of blood
Locked up, when you get
Banned from heaven
Looking at yourself and
You're dripping down blood
Don't worry, I'll get up
To get to where I belong
 
Some more things I picked up on while driving

On " Roadkill Morning "

Sneaks up like a sucker punch
____ jumper cables on my junk
Why would you worry about me?


On " Smile Pretty For The Devil "

In the blink of an eye, you're flying
Like an angel, gently smiling
Reborn to all I'll always be ( this line could be wrong )

Five times I've died, it's all the same
Got only myself to blame
Never begged for you to rescue me
Then again, no one could _____
_________________________
Who gives a fuck? I do, that's who!


And now, won't we find out
______ with you straight down to hell
Funny you don't seem that _______
______________________________
When you smile pretty for the devil
 
On " One Day You Will Cry "

In the shell of a human being I'll die
With a smile on my face and watch you cry

On " Lobodomy "

I'm at the end of my rope you're tying
This is just draining on me
Hallucination, you re-possess
I dare you to look at me, like a psycho freak

You motherfuckers wanna give me a lobodomy?
( Fuck no ) you think you know who I am? ______ fucking sane
You started messin' ____ die, ________ a maniac
( Fuck yeah ) I'll give you my last word
When I begin my attack
 
ShadesOfTwilight go some good ideas....im working on V2 of all my lyrics.....ill post then on here soon
 
Hi everyone! In all lyric sites in Tie My Rope song Chorus are: Tell me why,
so I can quietly bitch and moan
To this light,
that I’m not going down!
Hanging by,
the rope you tie for me!
Lift me up,
while I’m still alive!

But in my opinion: Tell me why, so i can quietly feel so high
Give me try, that i'm not going down
I would climb, the rope you tie for me
Lift me up, while I'm still alive!

and: Your mother is old not one id want to WAKE UP WITH!
 
Hi everyone! In all lyric sites in Tie My Rope song Chorus are: Tell me why,
so I can quietly bitch and moan
To this light,
that I’m not going down!
Hanging by,
the rope you tie for me!
Lift me up,
while I’m still alive!

But in my opinion: Tell me why, so i can quietly feel so high
Give me try, that i'm not going down
I would climb, the rope you tie for me
Lift me up, while I'm still alive!

and: Your mother is old not one id want to WAKE UP WITH!

The chorus in the first recording of Tie My Rope sounds to me like:
Tell me why, so I can quietly bitch alone/bitch & moan
To this light, that I'm not going down
Hanging by, the rope you tie for me
Lift me up, while I'm still alive

The chorus in the Blooddrunk version sounds more like:
Tell me why, so I can climb and feel so high
To this light, that I'm not going down
I will/would climb, the rope you tie for me
Pick me up, while I'm still alive
 
Tell me why, so I can quietly bitch alone/bitch & moan
To this light, that I'm not going down
Hanging by, the rope you tie for me
Lift me up, while I'm still alive

The chorus in the Blooddrunk version sounds more like:
Tell me why, so I can climb and feel so high
To this light, that I'm not going down
I will/would climb, the rope you tie for me
Lift me up, while I'm still alive
The Blooddrunk version sounds like it's still "Hanging by" to me
 
The Blooddrunk version sounds like it's still "Hanging by" to me

i actually think its

Tell me why so i can climb and feel so high
to this light, and im not coming down
haggard for- the rope you tie for me
pull me up while im still alive
 
After reading sulo's heres my update on done with everything die for nothing

Let me bring you down real easy
you've got no room left to run
so you preach over me like i will never know
go on if they want you to
just for your peace of mind
I'm done, not fucking shamed
Don't ever laugh, before you die

Wonder, Wonder why you wander
looking for me-never seen
what the fuck
cant be your servant
I hear Just Let me die
they got too far
so my end
Don't blame me, forget it, let me out
to the fact that i dont care
Or maybe the fact you're blind up there

Take me away
anyway, that's overwith
dont care, I dont care which way
Toss Me Aside
I wont crash
I will never judge
what you've done to me, die for nothing

IM DONE-WANNA DIE!

Take me away
anyway, that's overwith
dont care, I dont care which way
Toss Me Aside
I wont crash
I will never judge
what you've done to me, die for nothing

Here's some more suggestions for Done With Everything, Die For Nothing. I'm sure some of it's wrong.

Let me break it down real easy
Got nothin' left to guard
So you preach over me
Like I will never know
Go on if they want you to
Just for your peace of mind
I'm done, no fucking shame
another lie, before you die

Wonder why you, why you wonder
Looks like you'll never die

What the fuck can be a psycho
I hear, just let me die
They got to fight so I had suffer me
For bleeding, let me out

To the fact that I don't care
Or maybe the fact you're blind up here

Take me away
Anyway that's not my way
I don't care, I don't care which way
Toss me aside
I won't crash
I will never judge
I'm a deadbeat, Die for nothing

I'm not waiting, die
 
Here's some more suggestions for Done With Everything, Die For Nothing. I'm sure some of it's wrong.

Let me break it down real easy
Got nothin' left to guard
So you preach over me
Like I will never know
Go on if they want you to
Just for your peace of mind
I'm done, no fucking shame
another lie, before you die

Wonder why you, why you wonder
Looks like you'll never die

What the fuck can be a psycho
I hear, just let me die
They got to fight so I had suffer me
For bleeding, let me out

To the fact that I don't care
Or maybe the fact you're blind up here

Take me away
Anyway that's not my way
I don't care, I don't care which way
Toss me aside
I won't crash
I will never judge
I'm a deadbeat, Die for nothing

I'm not waiting, die

okay, well thats pretty good, but i still think mine sounds mor accurate, but i will admit that your take makes a bit more sense, its the same basic idea though
 
You motherfuckers wanna be me? a livin' part of me. (Not sure about this)
(Fuck no) You think you know who I am? (Right)
Im in-Fucking-sane (I think this is still missing something)
You started messin with death (Right)
No one said Im a Maniac (Right)
(Fuck yeah) I'll give you my last word (Right)
When I will give my attack (Not sure about attack)