Aeonblade said:
Are people born poets? I recently wrote rough lyrics for a song about the bullshit Chuck Schulidner went though in his last days, and I can't see to write anything overly smart or deep, just what came to my mind, and most of it probably doesn't make sense or flow. So I'm curious, did you people really pay attention in English class or what.
idk it takes me about ten minutes to have one page of standard notebook paper full of lyrics that rhyme one every line, and/or have about the same amount of syllables, here i will type one now...
in the darkest of places,
where no one dares,
lies a village of those,
that no one cares,
people flee here,
when they are hurt,
the youngest here,
only play with dirt,
the sun rises,
but never sleeps,
walk by as anothger weeps,
a beautiful day,
is when skies turn black,
once you come here,
you dont go back,
for here lie those not good enough
they try but outside the village is too rough,
in here we are all the same,
but outside here is just a game,
once you join here,
you are an outcast,
here you are accepted,
regardless your past,
if you're coming here,
dont make haste,
here there is too much time to waste,
here we are all victims of the earth,
we have been that way since our birth,
the ignorant will die chasing greed,
its because our words they didnt heed,
lust will kill off the rest,
but to help we tried our best,
they think we are pathetically weak,
but when they ignore us they become meek,
for this is the village of outcasts,
we are stronger than the others,
i survive cause i am the one who lasts,
in the end the outcast conquers.
that was without any editing, i think that one took me 20 minutes, tell me what you think
