Need some direction/guidence with this mix

[Demonstealer]

So I'm the same dude from the 'Trouble with tone thread'

I got that sorted. Have gotten round to a very very basic mix I did last night. I thought I'd just share it here and hopefully get some feedback from you guys that will help me.

Unmastered
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1953726/Unrelenting Trial Mix.mp3

Mastered with Linemb, S1 Imager and PSP Vintage Warmer
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1953726/Unrelenting Trial MixMastered.mp3

 

[Demonstealer]

Oh yeah and I will be changing the drum samples around a bit, kick especially. And yes that fast double bass part needs some fixing.

 

[Harry Hughes]

Probably will get a better response if you post it here :

http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/rate-my-mix-tone-threads-413/

 

[Demonstealer]

Done

 

[Demonstealer]

Also updated links incase anyone is reading on this thread.

Unmastered
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1953726/Unrelenting Trial Mix.mp3

Mastered
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1953726/Unrelenting Trial MixMastered.mp3