Well here's my opinion:
I really like what you are doing. I am drawn to heavy, melodic, emotional music (though not goth), specifically that within the deat/black realm. A couple minor complaints though....1)The acoustic intro is REALLy long and REALLY nice, though the length was testing even my patience, so I would suggest a laid back drum beat as a pick up during the second phase of the acoustics, drum vs.acoutic dynamics are always appealing to me. 2)When the electric comes in over the acoustic, it appears to be tuned slightly differently, creating a kind of unintentional sounding dissonance, though the contrast of electric melody with the acoustics is quite nice. 3)The clean vocals have got to go, or be more on key.
I really like this though, it sounds like very mature songwriting...how old are you guys? I know, as a 19 yr old, that it is VERY hard to find people my age who can play their intruments emotionally like that (I still feel alone in that regard at my college!). I say "Bravo", though it could be cleaned up (though give yourselves credit!) very very nice, indeed. And great band name! Also the guitar work near 6;55 or so was killer
-Jeff (aka Sadistik)
note-This was all in reference to Her blank portrait.