You should make it heavier. So that the keys arent the main thing but they are still totally noticable. The vocals need something to accompany them/back them up.
My opinion still stands... I REALLY liked the intro (a lot more before the guitars were added, the voice is a nice touch though)...the intro just captures you... and you're expecting something great, the tempo picks up... you're SO ready and then...
This like popeye the sailor pirate cartoon theme music comes on... it's a let down. And then it gets sorta annoying/repetitive... I see how you came up with this cuz you're a Finntroll fan but ionna. And well, I'll let you slide on the vocals, eventhough they're really bad... but you say they are a joke then it's fine, I mean... I can hear you run out of breath/choke on your word in one part.