Norfmentis - Under The Moutains

You should make it heavier. So that the keys arent the main thing but they are still totally noticable. The vocals need something to accompany them/back them up.
 
My opinion still stands... I REALLY liked the intro (a lot more before the guitars were added, the voice is a nice touch though)...the intro just captures you... and you're expecting something great, the tempo picks up... you're SO ready and then...

:erk: This like popeye the sailor pirate cartoon theme music comes on... it's a let down. And then it gets sorta annoying/repetitive... I see how you came up with this cuz you're a Finntroll fan but ionna. And well, I'll let you slide on the vocals, eventhough they're really bad... but you say they are a joke then it's fine, I mean... I can hear you run out of breath/choke on your word in one part.

Great start though.