Hey man, thanks for the suggestions!
I think you're right about the first one... I couldn't see her through all the rain
Although I'm not buying 'he'll sustain the end of the world' because the title of the song is Ephemeral, which means 'a lifespan of one day'. Since the verse and the song is describing a person with one day left to live, I don't think it fits that 'he'll sustain'... ya know
As for Blue Gallery, I believe you're right about 'the ways of time'.
As far as the second verse, I think it's 'painted the day, a haunting cast of moon' kinda seems right, as Renkse used the same lyrical element of 'painting' in the song Grey Dawn with the lyrics 'I painted with rain the sight of the daybreak'
After listening to the other verse, I'm starting to think that it's 'I fear white ghosts like me, in the tiding's October... cuz I'm not hearing the 'of october'... it's just 'tiding's october'
[Break my wings I've lost it all] heh, that one confused the hell out of me and I'm still not sure I have it right.
and the first three lines of Sightless, I'm not hearing the same thing, but hey, your guess is as good as mine...
oh, and if you happen to possess October Tide's demo, maybe you can give me your opinion on my attempt at the lyrics of To Die From Strength
[[Various souls
create immortal strength
far away
far away from any strength
With my lifeless soul
we die from strength [so close]
so close to the edge now
oooo sing me a song
Grah
]]
[[We pass immortals
you say my smile is grim
but it changes as we reach the temples top
To die from strength]]
[[Die from all strength
]]
[[Various souls
create immortal strength
Far away
From anyone having
Strength]]
[[Oh in the life of souls
we die from strength
so close to the edge now
Various seconds flee
We called someone to save you
Now breathe the air]]
[[I am inside
But my spirit died
Together we walk
To the garden
You turn your face
and I sigh
mother is dead
her strength is forever
Grah
]]
You've got an ear for growls as well! I appreciate your input, as do other OT fans [i hope]