I think it is a good idea, to write our poems and to interchange ideas about them. Please try to explain a little bit about your poem and tell us why did you wrote it.
Being the person who created this thread, im the first one to post my poem.
Being the person who created this thread, im the first one to post my poem.
When i wrote this poem, i was dreaming with the girl who i love...however one day all of us will die. The poem its called RIP
RIP
The funeral has begun
"Let this soul to find some love"
Now, you rest in peace
And i can only offer you my tears.
Your face look so tired
Becouse you gave me your life
The birds sing to you a beutiful piece
While i give you the last kiss.
Since the first time i held you hand
I knew you were the one...to made me smile
Dressed in white you changed my nights
Now, your black veil rejects my eyes.
Dont be afraid, and find your way
"Let the sky guide you towards light"
I will think of you as ling as i live
Soon, ill be with you...