Promo song mixed with Yamaha hs-50

[::XeS::]

Hi
I've remixed with my new Yamaha hs-50m a little promo I did time ago.
Guitars: Schecter c1 / emg / Engl Savage 60 / GuitarHack impulses

I did 2 different version..

1st version: http://sneapforum.celtiaproductions.co.uk/::XeS::/060713NEWMONITOR.mp3

2nd version (louder and a little different eq):
http://sneapforum.celtiaproductions.co.uk/::XeS::/060713NEWMONITOR2.mp3

What do you think about the mix? Which is the best version?
Thank you

 

[::XeS::]

Anyone?

 

[KeithRT99]

i think the second one sounds meaner but not as thick as the first. they both have their plusses/minuses.

 

[AudioPhile777]

the snare gets lost in the mix at times...

and sounds like uke:

guitars dont sound bad... not great, but not bad.

 

[::XeS::]

Thank you for the replies!
This is a new version.
I changed the bass eq, I changed a little the snare and other things
Check it out:
http://sneapforum.celtiaproductions.co.uk/::XeS::/060713NEWMONITOR5.mp3

 

[Soundlurker]

I like it..snare and cymbals don't sound too good, though. You could also leave a bit more mids in the guitars, maybe.

 

[::XeS::]

Thank you.
I'm a big fan of Tue Madsen and my goal is to obtain a pumping bass approach and a powerful kick typical of his works...not a rip off...but I like very much his way to see metal. Listening to those samples, I understand I'm a lot far away from these levels
Now I'm working on Cymbals and tomorrow I'll post a new sample (I have not enough Ambient in the actual version).
What do you mean with "leave a bit more mids"? Add some mids or cut som mids?

 

[Soundlurker]

I mean the guitars are a bit too scooped, but that's down to preferences. Boosting mids doesn't seem like an option but if you've cut mids from the guitars, I would suggest that you leave them having more mids than they do in this sample.

 

[::XeS::]

Today I tested my last versions (5 and 6) on my car....they sounds horrible
They have a tremendous amount of bass and trebbles (Oh)...totally unbalanced! :\
I think the second version is the best at this point...monday I'll turn down a little the guitars and add a little bass and eq...Anyway, real miced Ohs would make the differences (an oktava set is on the way )

 

[::XeS::]

This is a new attempt....I hope you like it a little more
http://sneapforum.celtiaproductions.co.uk/::XeS::/060713NEWMONITOR7.mp3