Remix of a track i put up here recently- comments?

[DigitalMetal]

Hi All

Heres a remix of a track i put up here recently ive been working on it a lot through several revisions to try n get to the point where i hope its sounding relatively commercial to go on my bands debut EP
Does it sound good enough to go on a CD to you guys (pending mastering)
- any comments are much appreciated
thanks !

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7388077/BrutalityX2.6.mp3



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[unrest]

Sounds good, but the low end needs some attention. The mix is very sub-bass heavy to the extent that when the sub drop hits at 2:38, it doesn't really have the impact it should. Work on controlling the bass guitar and cutting some of the lows out of those toms.

Besides that, I'd back off the reverb on the toms some. Also, you're automating the guitar reverb so it only plays during those guitar-only bits, right?

 

[DigitalMetal]

Thanks!

How this instead:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7388077/Brutality%20X2.7.mp3

Ive tamed the bass and kick and low end of the toms, rolled back the tom reverb a bit too
The guitar reverb is static not automated.

Thanks for your input.

 

[DigitalMetal]

anyone else help at all?