Return to ashes opinions/vocals?

[noarin]

hey guys, here's a full song by me,

I'm looking for some opinions on the mix and song, maybe lower the kick a bit? too much treble in the overall mix?

I'm also looking for somebody who might want to do vocals for me on this one?

here's the song:

www.sanandreas-web.com/returntoashes-01.mp3

thanks for listening!

Rob

 

[noarin]

could use some feedback on this, anything will do, thanks!

 

[alan1990]

guitar tone specificly sounds realy good in my opinion so does the snare, but in my opinon both could use some more air.. try to leave more extreem highs in the guitars.