Share your thoughts on my song/production?

[NAO C14]

Sneapsters! I would like your input on this song I put up last night.

General info:
Guitar L is a Carvin DC 700 w/ Bare Knuckle Pickups (Rebel Yell - Neck/Aftermath - Bridge)
Guitar R is an Ibanez RG7321
Bass is an LTD B55
Guitars were processed with Axe Fx-II
Drums are Steven Slate 3.5, from which I used a custom built kit

Anything else you guys wanna know, just ask away.

[youtube]yRcahL3OT2g?hd=1[/youtube]


Oh, and I apologize for my sloppiness. I'm still working on getting my right hand precise.

 

[Derykus]

http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/rate-my-mix-tone-threads-413/

 

[Lasse Lammert]

http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/rate-my-mix-tone-threads-413/

I was just gonna say that, thanks

 

[NAO C14]

Dang, sorry about posting it in the wrong place. Thank you for the update, guys