Corny
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Ok, I know that you two work on this, but I hope that you don't mind that I put my 2 cents here. These are my thoughts about the things Arcane mentioned:
Chorus is right Mitch, it's a G, not an F.
Bar 186/187: The version Mitch uploaded is correct here. This is one of these typical licks which ascends in the locrian pattern and descends in the ionian pattern (3 notes per string style). Alexi plays it often and I slowed the recording down to 50%, so I'm pretty sure.
Bar 170 is not easy to transcribe. I think Mitch got everything correct (although I have trouble hearing the last note (F, 12th fret)). BUT I think, although it's not very common to play it like this, that you should try to swap the last two notes of the third Arpeggio (Emin), so that the 16th fret is played before the 17th fret. I know that it's an uncomfortable strink skip with this fingering, but that's what my ears tell me.
Tell me what you think. And great work you two!
Chorus is right Mitch, it's a G, not an F.
Bar 186/187: The version Mitch uploaded is correct here. This is one of these typical licks which ascends in the locrian pattern and descends in the ionian pattern (3 notes per string style). Alexi plays it often and I slowed the recording down to 50%, so I'm pretty sure.
Bar 170 is not easy to transcribe. I think Mitch got everything correct (although I have trouble hearing the last note (F, 12th fret)). BUT I think, although it's not very common to play it like this, that you should try to swap the last two notes of the third Arpeggio (Emin), so that the 16th fret is played before the 17th fret. I know that it's an uncomfortable strink skip with this fingering, but that's what my ears tell me.
Tell me what you think. And great work you two!