Rock Hydra said:
Yes...Fluidly...no.
I could play a G#, but I'd have to calculate it out.
To your second question, well...i could figure it out...but when it comes out off of the top of my head...I don't know...
Ah right ok. Well if you know them, or you can at least work it out, then that's something.
I don't really know to explain it properly but as long as you know the scale, then you can play diatonically.
C#min = C#, D#, E, F#, G#, A, B, C#.
So all you have to do is make sure you play those notes and it should fit.
Looking at your solo, I noticed a G was the first note and also a D in the 3rd bar and also that G in the last bar with the tapping. They're pretty much the notes making it sound off.
The reason I said did you write it in Bmin was because you used a B pent minor scale box shape at bar 3-6. If you move that up 2 frets, it'll be C#min and fit perfectly.
One thing that can really help when building a melody is actually paying attention to what chords you're playing over. In this case, it's C#5, A5 & B5, then G#5 at the end. Obviously these are just powerchords but with the key signature and everything, it implies:
C#min (C#,E, G#)
A (A, C#, E)
B (B, D#, F#)
G# (G#, B#, D#)
So after looking at those chords and the notes that they contain, you could try and aim to hit one of those notes over the chord that's playing at that certain time. Of course, you don't just have to do arpeggio after arpeggio etc, you can play anything but if you land on a D# just as the backing track plays a B chord, it's going to sound wonderful. (D# is the major 3rd of a B major chord!!)
Hopefully that made some kind of sense and wasn't too confusing?? But that's pretty much what goes through my mind as I'm writing leads, how does (x) note fit over (X) chord and does the melody sound any good.
The last chord is tricky, it's a 5 -> 1 progression in the harmonic minor scale, so to cut a long story short, a C# harmonic minor scale or a G# major arpeggio would be perfectly over it. If you need any help or anything, I'll be glad to help out.
bobbilly said:
very nice idea warheart you can put my solo in too if you want,
I would like to be in
Of course. Everyone that posts a solo will be put in.