The Official Poetry Thread

[Lotus_Eater_RVD]

hahahah, yeah, its always best to let out all of that creative anguish!

 

[Nephtys]

Hey! I love poetry and writing, I have lots of it, but the majoroty is in portuguese! Well.. you can analyze my splatter lyric! hahaah it may have some mistakes, but it doesn't matter, what do ya think??


It's not a benign prostatic hyperplasia
seems like a hyper chronical diarrea
your cappillaries will explode and
you'll vomit rotten coagulated blood
spill all the dead and decayed leukocytes
embolus your epenynoma with a intravenous ischemia
the neoplasia will show the need of a nephrotomogram
neck dissection
neck dissection WOAAAAAAARRRR
blood-brain barrier barred!!!!




after it I'll post some serius stuf!! hahaha

 

[CRrEiTsIRED]

Sounds like I'm reading my latest blood exam.

 

[MagSec4]

after it I'll post some serius stuf!! hahaha

I don't know.. hyper chronical diarrhea and vomiting rotten coagulated blood sounds like pretty serious stuff!

 

[Lotus_Eater_RVD]

thats one of those lyrical works that only doctors could look at and be like "that is SOOOOO metal!"

to the rest of us its like "huh?"

 

[Maili Björklund]

I've looked through my stuff like a hundred times, but they're all either too personal or too sick

 

[Lanterns]

I've looked through my stuff like a hundred times, but they're all either too personal or too sick

Not as lame as "No Salvation"...

 

[Maili Björklund]

It's not lame. I like it!

 

[Lanterns]

Thank u Maili but I told you which one of yours I love most...and I don't think it's that sick!

 

[Maili Björklund]

I thought about that one too... But you know why I'm not posting it! :Shedevil:

 

[Lanterns]

Yeah, teehee!

 

[Maili Björklund]

back

 

[Lanterns]

Okay, Funny Farm sista, let's try to quit spamming now I gotta fuck off to the music school now....and PHULEEEASE write me! Kiitos!

 

[Maili Björklund]

But we were just about to START spamming

Sure I'll write you, gotta go look for that damn interview somewhere under my bed BTW hou'd'cha like my new poem (Mindfucked) ? Stay nuts!

 

[Lotus_Eater_RVD]

you two gotta post some more! there is nothing too sick or too insane for us!!!! well....me.

 

[Lanterns]

@ Maili -I like Mindfucked, it's nuts, teehee
@ Lotus Eater -some of my older stuff (a lot of which sux and is really embarrassing btw) is in the old poetry thread. As for Maili...well she has a reason to be paranoid

 

[-Gavin-]

I don't know.. hyper chronical diarrhea and vomiting rotten coagulated blood sounds like pretty serious stuff!

 

[Maili Björklund]

As for Maili...well she has a reason to be paranoid

I take that as a complement

 

[Lotus_Eater_RVD]

i would take that as a big compliment!

 

[_Quarantine_]

@ The Lantern Nut: the last poem you posted is definitely the one I like most of all the poems you've posted Keep rocking!

I think it's really corageous you guys post your work here... I'd never dare!